Super Detective in the Fictional World

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My only critique is that it starts off slow, but that being said it builds the character and world building. It gets rather good as slowly the crimes interconnect and move the plot forward. Stick to it until chapter 25, things go boom.

This is a very interesting story. It's based in the US with what I think to be the early marvel universe as a backdrop, Though the latter has only been hinted at with references to Tony Stark and the Captain, the story is still in it's very early stages so I can't be too impatient especially with all the action we're getting so early. Definitely suggest trying this one out if you want something different and fun to read. Btw, can anyone explain the Trial Read thing? I discovered things had changed from how they used to be just last night and I'm having a hell of a time understanding how it works. This one was apparently "Picked" so does that mean it'll definitely be released or will it be put up for voting? If a story isn't picked does that mean it won't be translated? And if so how exactly does one help a story get picked because I can't find anything extra to do besides unlocking chapter and leaving a review. The forum hasn't helped because I can't find the post (Presumably they made one) explaining it all.

I finished it. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I recommend it. I’m curious about future projects.

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This shouldn't be in fanfic, I didn't know about such a good novel

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I have to story is interesting but the thing that interested me most are the action scenes just by reading them you easily imagine the whole scene. other novels action scenes describing is not so good 😕

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I dunno if I reviewed this before, but still love this. It's a giant mix of worlds, and I dunno why ppl angry over it being fanfic. Pretty good plot wise and the worlds are incorporated pretty well. I cant remember the "racist American sentence" ppl talked about, cause it's literally never mentioned again in the later parts of story (I'm on 1459 chps and never seen such things show up).

5 star. good story

Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout

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So this has TONS of great qualities. Its actions scenes are very well thought out and the other scenes attempt to fill in the life of the MC to some degree. It could use a lot less misogyny to be honest, but as I understand its a translation of a Chinese novel? The translator took some liberties with the story line apparently, so why not just cut out the misogyny as well? It’s just unnecessary and obnoxious.

this is just a power fantasy disguised as a realistic fiction and the world doesn't feel alive at all it's so lame that the setting at start is great but was ruined just to make it a power fantasy

Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout

Fanfic that costs money? There are waaaay too many of those on this app/site so... Yeah. stop recommending this to me every single step of the way, thanks. Bye!

Is it ok to charge readers when author use MARVEL SHIELD, etc in his story? What a rip-off. It's not 100% author original works. I don't even feel surprised if one day this novel is being asked to be dropped.

A great story containing a lot of fictional character out of tv series and movies. For binge watchers of tv shows or movies, the story presented by the author will be familiar. It is great how Luke gradually interact with different main leads of different shows. It is funny and exciting as I read the story development. Hopefully it'll continue to develop more in the future.