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when this world was created one hundred thousand years ago, it brought with it many millennia of agony, the world was in pain humans turned into demons, demons turned into humans. it was ferocious. But then a war of no winners changed fate, once and forever, it was fast, all evil vanished in seconds. and it was the reason the world is in peace now, but this memory remains preserved in the immortal's minds. the story is about how and why the immortal sacrificed all he has to achieve peace

Ali_son_of_Majid · Fantasy
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5 Chs

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Name: Tobi

Nickname:

Eye: Volan (level 3)(flying the speed and altitude depends on the level)

Height: 165 cm(5'4 F)

Age:16

appearance description: short black hair with a slim body

After school was over the four friends went to start training. "first you need to learn the basic eye training which is 5-20 minutes of looking at the sun every day and doing staring contests 5 times a day and drinking more water than usual(don't do this at home" Bernard(Tobi's dad) said, and so they started training.

Name: Bernard

Nickname: Flying Champion

Eye: Volashi(level 4)(flying the speed and altitude depends on the level)

Height: 183 cm (6 F)

Age: 38

Appearance description: short blonde hair with a slim body

After they finished training Bernard told them to try to defeat him in a 1 vs 4 fight the rules are simple the first to fall on the ground losses.

Sutaro summoned a bear and commanded it to attack but Bernard dodged Sutaro's attack by flying using his eye then Tobi tried to fly and attack his dad but his dad was 3 times faster than him and they lost Bernard. "where did he go" Ash said "I don't know " Ream replied then out of nowhere Bernard suddenly attacked all 4 of them and knocked them on the ground.

"How did you do that" Ash said so Bernard replied by saying that it's experience difference, and then Bernard told them that they lack experience in fighting and told them that their next training is fishing.

"fishing? why?" Ash said as he didn't understand why fishing is going to help them in the Al-Rejeba local tournament. "you'll know when you meet George he's known for his quote fishing teaches you two things, patience and..... I forgot the second thing" everyone started laughing then Bernard said, "It's not my fault he says stupid things all the time" then they proceed to go to the seacoast to meet George. Sutaro said "have you told him that we are going to fish with him" Bernard replied "yes".

Name: George

Nickname: the stubborn fisherman

Eye: Gurashi(level 4)(more strength than humans underwater, faster swimming, and the ability to breath underwater longer. the amount of increase depends on the level of the eye)

Height: 198 cm (7'4 F)

Age: 34

Appearance description: long curly brown hair with a big brown beard and an overweight body. He seems to always wear sunglasses

once they met George they noticed that he doesn't call everyone by their name instead he calls everyone George which was weird in Ash, Tobi, Ream, and Sutaro's opinion. But either way, they hopped on the boat and set sail, once they were gone Bernard was pleased by the fact that he found a way to get rid of them "whooo yeah baby" he said.

"Start the engine, George, we're leaving right now," George said,

After 10 long hours of waiting all of the kids where tired, bored and exhausted, then, suddenly, George said "it's a catch the tuna bit the bait, Georges"

Before continuing the story let me explain how people in this world hunt the stubborn tuna fish.

First after the fish bit the bait the fisherman Pulls the hook as fast as he can then when the fish gets close to the boat 3 fishermen jump onto the sea to catch the fish with their hands or eye power and then put it in the freezer.

this is why the stubborn tuna fish is really hard to catch.

ok let's continue shall we?

So George pulled the fish and now it's close to the boat "one two three go, George boys" George said, and he jumped with Ash and Tobi to catch the big fish.

George activated his eye the gurashi (which makes him faster and stronger in the water and able to swim without breathing depending on its level for George since its a level 3 he can swim for 10 hours without breathing and swim 10 times faster and is 10 times stronger in the water than humans who don't have a gurame) and then he said "hold it tight, Georges, don't let it run away, Georges" while they are fighting for their life another fish bit the other bait and another one after it "it's a triple catch, Georges, these stubborn fish won't run away from us" George said and after 2 hours of fighting and struggling to hunt these stubborn tunas the team finally caught them.

"this is a lucky day" George said while smiling happily.

now everyone is happy with what they have done today as it was a victorious one, Ash, Tobi, Sutaro, Ream, George and his fishermen all proud of each other, eating sandwiches, making jokes, laughing, giggling, and having a good time.

Name: Ream

Nickname:

Eye: Floran (level 3)(gives it's owner the ability to grow plants a lot faster and without any seeds, nutrients, or water. The amount of growth and how long does the plant last depends on the level of the eye)

Height: 150 cm (4'11 F)

Age: 16

Appearance description: long green hair she wears glasses and has a girly body

Name: Ash

Nickname:

Eye: kasain (ability to produce and control the fire element and the amount depend on its level)

Height: 169

Age:16

Appearance description: short red hair slim body

Name: Sutaro

Nickname:

eye: Dobutsun(the ability to summon animals that follow your orders. The size, strength, and number of the summond animals depend on the level of the eye)

Height: 155 (5'1 F)

age:16

appearance description: long black hair with wolf ears and a tail and a girly body

Then, the crew heard a weird sound. George went to investigate and he saw a fish, Two times as big as their boat, he saw its eye a gurago(it looks like a shark swimming in the ocean eating a whale) and then he shouted "it's a monster the 1-million vas tuna. We can't defeat it, we need to" then the fish attacked the boat Tobi caught Ash, Sutaro summoned a shark and caught Ream, will the fishermen crew all could swim without any help, "don't loosen your defenses, it'll strike again" George said. Ash thought to himself "I have the kasain, I can burn a building but I have never used its full power, so it'll be hard, I'll wait for the fish's next attack" then the fish tried to attack again once it's above the water Ash used all his power to burn a fin, he thought to his self again "I could've done better I could've burned it all, I need to improve my accuracy". "good move, George, now it'll move slower" George said.

the 1-million-vas tuna is a legendary fish known for the fact that its size and strength is 10 times that of the normal fish

The fight lasted for a long time, Sutaro kept on summoning sharks and other aquatic creatures to make it harder for the fish to attack. Ash on the other hand tried to attack the fish when it strikes but he seems to always miss. Ream was panicking as she thought she can't do anything, and George and his crew were punching and kicking the fish every time it gets above the water while Tobi was distracting the fish so that George, his crew, and Ash can attack it.

After all of that, it was finally over, the crew found their way home with the 1-million dollar vas tuna. "just like I always say fishing for the stubborn tuna teaches you two things, patience, and to show the inner Monir inside of you", "what's the inner Monir" Sutaro said "he's a legendary old warrior people say he has a torona I've never heard of an eye that ends with na they say he can increase his size and strength to become 100 times that of scar truly a beast" George replied.

Name: scar

Nickname: the unbeatable fighter

Eye: torogo (speed and strength of a bull or more depending on the level of the eye)

Height: 250 cm (8'2 F)

Age: unknown

Appearance description: the longest black hair that you have ever seen, a gigantic body, a face full of scars and pain, they say you can see death in his eyes

interesting facts about scar: people say he has never lost a battle in his life,

they also say he's the second strongest human on this planet, or even, the strongest, they also say he has fought everyone he saw(or the people that have at least 1% chance of beating him.

and he is the emperor of the great Al-Rejeba empire

the four friends then said goodbye to George and his crew and went back to their houses with new experiences, now after analyzing the fights they know what they need to improve.

Ash needs to control his power more accurately. Ream needs to not panic, trust herself and she needs to learn how to use her power more widely. Tobi much like Ash. need to control his power more accurately. Sutaro on the other hand needs to learn more about animals so she can summon the right one at the right moment.

With these experiences they are ready to start the real training to become stronger and stronger to defeat whatever lies in their way, to get that beautiful ring of truth.

So, here we meet again, reader.

what do you think about this one?? I think it's better than the previous one by a lot I hope we share the same feelings.

anyway, I want to explain how I name eyes

so first let's take for example scar's eye the (torome) you noticed (me) right? that means eye in Japanese its the name of the eye in general, the level of scar's eye is 4 that's why it's called toroshi.

level 1 eyes end with (chi) example: torochi

level 2 eyes ends with (ni) example: toroni

level 3 ends with (n) example: toron

level 4 ends with (shi) example: toroshi

and when talking about the eye, in general, it ends with (me) examples: torome, gurame, and kasaime