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Strongest Tragedy Aura - Host luck -99999 Author kinda superbly stupid? He thinks Mc/protagonist needs a tragic life etc to be strong lol the worst is the authors stupidity and makes Mc's every turn becomes tragic, doesn't know how to make "chance encounter" that's what "protagonists aura" supposed to be, have the mc encounter good fortune to power up, not ridiculously send him to tragic states and those around him. Hope this enlighten our stupid author, or put a tragedy/rape/stupid author tag on your novel so people will not waste time
Writing skill is good to the point I'm envious of it. Update stability?? who knows!~ Story development?? because I'm reader who always imagine myself as protagonist so I'm a bit biased!! so my opinion its trash because my brain pressured non-stop since I'm binge reading this novel 2-3 day!~ Character design?? no matter how good it is, its useless since the author will screw him over and over to the point I'm tired of it!~ World background?? its quite good?? meh its still ruined by non-stop torture of fate!~ my previous review is too much when I see your efforts writing this so I'm increasing it but after hard time to think, this is all I can give you!!~ at least your skill in writing is good, so be proud of that!!~ though that non-stop screwing your own MC seem too much for me but maybe its your fetish?? meh whatever!!~
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It's definitely a comedy I'll give it that. Lots of trope jokes, kudos. It's enjoyable as a parody. Maybe have something to drink before reading though. Don't take it so seriously. Yeah the MC is a***wful and but this is not a compelling epic or anything- it's funny when you read too many serious attempts at this genre. My only major complaint then, are the walls of text. It's just a headache to read through.
Worst garbage ever written on this site. The author must either have quite a few loose screws on his brain and a huge masochist. The storyline and tragedy level is literally cancer. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger? Would've wished he died and stayed dead in the beginning for this piece of turd work.