Reviews of Strongest Mage with the Lust system
Strongest Mage with the Lust system
Blizzard54k
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I love this novel so far and I just caught up after reading for 2 days now I'm so sad that I gotta wait for more chapters. I like the characters the background the system I like everything about it and can't wait to continue reading. I recommend this novel to everyone. Thank you Author for a great story I will continue to support
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This is review after 167 chapters... I think I've written pretty good story considering it was my first time.💪(Of course, there are many other authors who have written countless times better than I did) However, This story also has MANY flaws such as some grammatical mistakes and some inconsistency in story. If you read the story, you are welcome to criticize it and I'll try to correct and improve based on your suggestions if I find them good. ***However, there are some things which you won't like but it doesn't mean that it's sh** so don't try to judge it and read if you like if not no one gonna force you to read. Happy reading~
The novel is decent, not amazing, but not bad, but as I read, I kept on noticing multiple inconsistencies, and also, the MC, Max, is actually an idiot, he has no brains, he’s rash, and thinks pretty much only with his sausage. Early on in the chaps, he says after he got cucked by his friend, he only treats others the way he gets treated, but he completely disregards what he said just a few chaps later. Also, I don’t like the fact that he was flirting with his dad’s wife even though his dad is actually a good guy, that cares for him once again disregarding his previous statements. Like bro, your father was one of the only good guys that actually cared for you, and you trying to Ntr him. For me personally, I stopped reading during at that Prince chapter where he just he gets mad, explodes, and doesn’t even think of the consequences. Once again, this is not a bad novel, it’s just average, you could find a novel like this everywhere.
The book is great. So far I’m on chapter 84 and right now things are looking good, I won’t give any spoilers but really glad he’s not banging girls left to right, gives the characters and story more time to develop. Author-San added so much background even to side characters (gotta love that). He’s not overly powered but strong enough to beat people at his age which is great, he’s actually smart and not some wussy, dumb and irrelevant MC. I definitely give this a 10/10 you should check it out.
Well honestly the story was good. It has some interesting things if you know what I mean. I only gave this a 3.8 because of CCCRP ( common chinese cliche romance plot ) scene where the fl separates with mc cuz she got some unique physique like IJPDYB (Ice Jade Phoenix Divine Yin Physique /Body ) which attracted a SEOIV ( Supreme Elder Of Ice Valley) when she was 'coincidentally' passing by. This novel would have been perfect if not for this CCCRP. Anyway its only an opinion from my perspective so if you have no problem with this CCCRP then give this a try
Hello, Author here, This review is after 31 chapters. I've made quite a few mistakes and I know that and first few chapters aren't interesting as this is my first time writing a novel. but as the story progresses it is becoming quite a good novel to read, at least this is what I think. As for what your guys who are regular readers of my novel think, Please give your review and rate it so that your fellow readers and I can know what you think about it. As for the new readers, please give it a try and leave your review.
Reviewed at chp157: TLDR: It's not bad but neither is it good. It's a good read to kill time but not for me. I dropped it after powering through 100+chps. I think the weakest aspects of this novel are going to be the MC or the plot. Still, I recommend to anyone interested to give it a try. Some of you might enjoy it ✌️ WQ(4/5) - Very few grammar and spelling mistakes. Readable and decently written. SD(2/5) - Premise was interesting though the story development was subpar. Quite a few cliches and unfortunately far too many inconsistencies to ignore. Academy arc is quite boring imo. Overused cliches are fine as long as it's used well and presented in an interesting way. However, this was not the case here. CD(3/5) - I appreciate that author didn't want some Pokemon harem and actually tried to create interesting characters. However that took a dive once he hit the academy arc, I honestly think it's cause of the typical cliches found thus requiring some characters to be typical young master or damsel-in-distress archetypes. Now for the MC, oh boy, he's not evil but also not a goody two shoes, he's basically an average Joe who is actually rather pleasant. He's also a typical 'nice guy' in the romance department. Unfortunately it just seems MC doesn't learn from his mistakes and keeps mouthing off which causes him unnecessary drama and trouble. While it has also been stated that his world is cruel and strength is supreme, he also does not really show much initiative to actually get stronger or perhaps the author misuses time skips where MC doesn't seem to get any stronger. His system is also quite nerfed and it doesn't help that he's very lax when it comes to getting points. So while being in the academy, he doesn't truly require to be much stronger, in the broader world, he's actually very weak. I'm fine with weak characters, what I'm not fine with is characters who stay weak, who doesn't 'try hard'. US(4/5) - Author is consistent with updates and keeps interaction with audience. As this is his first novel, he's also very open to actual criticisms. WB(3/5) - Hard to judge as it's not a fanfic with an established world setting and since it's still the academy arc as of this review, we have a limited world scope. The introduction to their power system and settings is done in the initial chapters to get readers acquainted and is interesting enough. The world building hasn't truly begun to me. To the author: Now for a first novel of the author, not bad, decent attempt. I'm sure you'll improve after this and I hope to see your future works but for now this novel ain't for me. I still wish you all the best author! Keep striving and improving, you have potential!
It hook me at first, but I still can't believe how people can write sooo stupid Mc. He says : Im not strong enough, im need to be careful, procedes to flirt with a woman who is clearly the crush of a influential arrogant young master that will be trying to kill him... Oh, I have meet a superior being, that is strong enough to bring the whole country where I live to his knees, procede to disrespect him. Im okay with Mc who are helpless and powerless but at least you must give him something good, idk, inteligence, charisma, but no.
The story was ok, writing quality though there are mistakes it doesn't cause any confusion while reading. My issues are the inconsistencies, the MC says X but then does Y cause it adds more drama, or in one quick arc he destroys three 3* mages like they are paper, and then just a couple chapters later he struggles against one 3* and a 2* mage (because these 2 were the end of the arc boss supposedly he had to struggle). I am a few behind of current, but the story has turned into rabbit hole of side stories, and with the pacing side stories seem to never end (20 chapters for a single auction that is part of a side story that off loads one of the women for awhile). One of my other issues is how fights go, as others have said MC always struggles till he has one move left then pulls it out. However the fights are all Throw attack A see what happens, throw attack B, let enemy regroup, dodge or take a hit, then throw attack C. None of the fights exhibit any coordination with his team, or ability chain attacks. It is always Someone doing one ability everyone stands and waits to see if it works before doing anything else. As a team they have so many combinations they could use, but none of them are used. Author is hinting about a Tournament Arc that MC is gung ho about, but still keeps saying he wants to stay low key... All in all the story for me just lost it's hook for me to continue and it started at the Sect Arc and has just eroded.
I have read this book till 91st chapter and I have only one word for this book "Awesome" . Nowadays there are few books which are as near perfect as this one . Only downside is that it's so good that I cannot have enough of the chapters ,and after reading every new one I keep craving for more so I hope the author can upload more chapters if possible. Hope this helps new readers if they are interested that is.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Review after chapter 169 - Yes my fav number. Nothing much to say about this story but the early 20 chapters are kind of painful for me to read. Not bad but the inconsistency in early chapters is killing me. It still have some inconsistency but wasn't as bad as before Max is honestly pretty annoying but he is fine compared to most of the Harem Protagonist on this site. For the heroines they are good, so I have nothing to criticize about em. Update Stability, It is hella good, consistent and pretty hard for me to catch up. World Building is fine, although it will be more helpful if you goes into more detail about the world. For Grammar, I don't know about this cause English also isn't my first language so It is good enough for me to read and enjoy.
