Meng Luo Ting Die
To start, the plot, well.. We can see that it has the genre of the story is about revenge and reincarnation. And while reading, I can feel the same feeling compared with other stories. However, the story becomes unique because of the characters around the MC even though the MC's character somewhat with similar attitudes with other stories. The story is amusing, the turn of events is not fast wich is good. The writing style is good also. And the moral lessons that can be learn is quite good. That is why I can recommend it to my friends.
TLDR: Donโt waste your time. Even though it is short, there a lot of inconsistances and the editor couldnt be bothered with correcting names. The last 4 chapters only describe what happens and never explains anything about the system or the main villian behind the antagonists in the story. There is nothing worse than getting to the end of a story and being like โThatโs it?โ and โWhat about x, y, & z?โ I regret reading this story to the and I dont recommend it to anyone. The Female Lead (FL) has a system after her soul migrates to a new body in the same worls but that system is pretty much barely used at all. She gets so weak after using the deus ex machina powers once, that she needs hospitalization after minor incidents justifying the Male Lead (ML) obsessive need to protect her. The person who created the system and how the system ended up in the FL are introduced but never explored. Same with the supposed final villian whos trying to create the system (maybe? never really explored). This story is filled with topics and ideas that are introduced and then dropped promptly forgotten about. Even major things like who knows what secret and when they knew them. In addition the editing of the names is just bad. I get that the subject is implied in Chinese but when traslating to English, the correct subject needs to be used. Dont use ML name when the subject is antagonist 3. Do not mix up male and female pronouns. Do not use FL as both the subject and direct object in a sentance when they are clearly not beating themselves up or or talking down to themselves. It was a confusing and frustrating read that started out with a good premise that never lives up to itself. I suspect even the author was tired of the story at the end which is why she disnt continue and just ended it.
I really love this story. After reading the synopsis I feared to read it but after reading the first few chapters I started to love this story. Hope this story moves on like this. I like the brothers bartering over their sister and their protectiveness over her. Its very refreshing and face slap story. I am looking forward for more chapters
I find the humor in this book great. I find it uncultured to rate a book because it is similar to another. Let me tell you, everything will be similar to something else in this world. That does not define it as something bad. It's the details that define us. Anyways, I was surprised by the protagonist having a system. I think this will be very interesting to read. I'm excited for it's potential.
Such a wonderful story ,is not really good to be too greedy and over ambitious just like the parent who rejected their own biological daughter and choose an outsider over her , just because to them she is timid and not sophisticated like their adopted child because she was said to be brought up on the mountain sides not knowing that is an amazing child these story is about tang who live and enjoy life with his grandfather and boy friend ,she doesn't engage in anything else apart from going to school and having fun with her boyfriend but when her grandfather become sick she has to manage his business, and in the cause of doing so didn't have much time for her boy friend and he taught she was ignoring him and break up with her and just as her grandfather was getting well to manage his business again she have an accident and died but the spirit of another died girl who want revenge for what has been done to her entered her in order to get her revenge and she agree to help her avenge her death she encounter a lot of suffering while trying to do so but... find out for yourself
I really like it! I hope you make more and share your creativity to the world! I really cant wait what will happened next to Jinning. Her true colors really came. Even the director hated her...I hope that Liang will find Tang Xi soon because I really love how he really loved her in the end. Also I am excited to know who got between both them! This story is trilling! I really want to be in her place! But without abuse because I really hate people who abuse their own child and replace her with a brat..Anyway wish you goodluck and have a bright ideas in the future!
This story is A GEM! You'll regret by not reading this. I'm telling you guys! This story is fantastic, amazing, humorous, and so far, has a GREAT PLOT AND VIBES!!!!! I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART! THANK YOU FOR CREATING SUCH A GOOD STORY LIKE NO OTHER! *I wish I had brothers, which are older than me, so they would also treat me like a princess, protects me like they're scared that I'll break in any moment of danger or anything, boss them around like Imma' Queen and most of all, LOVE ME Irrationally and Unconditionally.
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I'd say the first third of this was pretty satisfying. A standard soapy drama with baby swaps and reincarnation. A contrived but satisfying plot with enemies dating back generations. A likable ML and a FL with potential. But as it gets to the second third, it drags along with progress mostly based on the FL refusing to take basic security precautions. It spends more time recounting her eating pounds of seafood everyday than on the plot. She constantly talks about wanting to become strong and finds her goals and abilities blocked by her physical condition, but she never works on it, just uses it as an excuse as to delaying things. I almost dropped it at that point and started skipping and skimming chapters to find out what happens. Until finally there is a rushed ending that only mostly wraps things up, leaving loose ends, but at least checking the most important todos off.
I really like the plot. I think it is promising but a shame it ended with just 543 chapters. There is a lot of things happening and the author introduced quite a number of people with, would I say could be promising in the story's development. But they just pop out like mushroom and then popped like bubble. Thus, I have an inkling that this story shouldn't have been at chapter 543. Yes, they have resolved most issues and dealt with most villains but what about that person behind the Qin Family? What about the Tan Family who was Tang Xi's Maternal family? And isn't there something going on with Jin Han's Family that might be related with Lu Li? Why introduce them to us and let us peak on their story without giving it any resolve? I think it would be great cause they might be in cahoots with that William bit then he just got caught. I guess what I want to say is, I am barely full with this meal. And I still crave some more. That's besides the fact of the glaring racism at beginning. Then, let's not forget the names being used which frustrated me and other things. In the end, for me this could've been better.
I really enjoyed reading this story. the cast of characters are great. everyone has well developed personalities and there is actual character growth with the biological parents. There are consequences and long term issues that feel realistic. The identity crisis of the MC is understandable, but also annoying at times. She keeps trying to reconcile her orecious life and her new one. however, the number of people that knew both are limited. so for the most part, its not the body she has now, but the person she is that the people around her care about. She is a new person, but seems to dwell on the fact that she was one person and is in the body of another. Also, she keeps talking about the things that really matter to her, certain people, but she dithers instead of just focusing on what will make her happy. doing design, but then monologing about how its not as important to her as the people she loves.Saying she wants to marry and have a family with the ML as soon as possible, but then talking about studying design in Paris and getting all the diplomaโs that she had in her previous life. she can speak multiple languages, does she really need to spend years in classrooms to get the bit of paper again when its not like anything she is going to do will require it? It just feels at times like she is standing in her own way. She has so many things that she wants to do, but seems to be doing the things that are on the bottom of the list instead of the ones that are the most important to her. if it was fear, it would be understandable, but it doesnt seem like that. it seems more like she is doing doing everything now instead of focusing on the most important things that were her biggest regrets. Aside from this, the story has a decent pace, the characters are well developed and fun. I like her brothers and bio brother, her adopted parents and her funny school friend/fan girl. Am also in love with the ML. Some funny bits, some cute bits. its a solid story. I am an impatient person, so i do want to shake the MC a bit and tell her to talk to her grandpa, shack up with the ML and just be herself. She has never acted like the new her, so aside from a name, she is virtually the same person, so she doesnโt need to worry about her identity so much.