Reviews of Stray

Your narration of the action scene is pretty good. I would suggest if you do not mind - to break your passages into shorter ones to give the illusion of fast pace to the readers. Otherwise, everything is pretty cool. Looking forward to it. Please update regularly.

I always give five stars in my review but this one really deserves a five star! The variety of your vocabulary and vivid imagery is not something to laugh at and it's a great source material for those who want to implement apocalyptic vibes in their story. The first chapter already hooked me in and it's an easy +1 collection from me to you. Worldbuilding is on point and I don't think this is your first time writing an apocalyptic book. Rooting for Scar Jensen though since she reminds me of Katniss Everdeen since she's a good shot herself hehe. Keep up the good work, author! I'm trying to write in all genres and a post-apocalyptic setting is a new thing for me so I'm still improving for my book.

This is great! You nailed the canon characters and your oc character is very good too. Everything feels very natural and Scar fits well and the canon changes are good. P.S. Do you know of any other Walking Dead fanfics? This is the first I’ve found.

Okay, for me. I don’t really enjoy apocalyptic stories as it is an endless cycle of death and betrayals, something I have a hard time coping since I enjoy getting attached to at least one character other than the mc. However, this blew my mind ! No no, not literally like with a gun... What I mean is this was a polished gem that lovers of this genre will enjoy this to the fullest. All in all, I highly recommended this to you readers and writers alike ! Keep up the good work, Author !

If you write a fanfiction with an oc, at least give the oc original lines. You're basically making the oc say things that the other characters would have said if she wasn't there....................................

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author did you change anything in the story or it just the same as the main series?just with scar involved?..................................

The main character Scarlet is essentially a combination of Rick,Andrea,Beth, and Carol. And when I say a combination, I mean it. alot of what she says and does are directly stripped from the characters in the show. Like word for word and action for action. The author also sticks to closely to the progression of the show making it irrelevant if the main character or the other oc's were there at all.

This is a good story that could move you to emotions. it good to read if you looking for a good walking dead story even though it doesn't have many chapters it is a good zombie story to read.

I am a very big fan of horror story. I came here to just take a look but my eyes stuck here. An amazing story with an amazing writing skill. Keep it up! Since I am busy nowadays, I couldn't able to read all chapters. But I will be back with much time. So, keep updating. I cheer you!

I am a huge Walking Dead fan, and I must say the author thoroughly managed to bring in the feeling of the series. This book is a must-read for all post-apocalyptic fans, even those who didn't see the Walking Dead, because the author manages to bring that world to life, and you will find out everything through the main character's eyes.

I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]

This book is very descriptive onto the characters and their emotional struggles. At first, it may seem 'edgy' but the characters have understandable emotions and their problems are portrayed in their actions but the dialogue could use some work but it's pretty great. Keep working and good luck!

This book is truly excellent! The author does such a wonderful job at creating a wold background and developing the characters within it. Following along with The Walking Dead story the author's main character fits in perfectly, I am rotting for Scar Jensen! For anyone that enjoys the apocalyptic genre, this is the book you have been waiting for! So much detail and descriptive imagery you feel like you are right there with the characters. Keep up the amazing work author!