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Ghost_Worker
Ghost_WorkerLv12Ghost_Worker

I love the beginning of the novel. I commend the author on their writing and I hope they keep on writing more amazing content.[img=recommend]

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obiparadise_purity
obiparadise_purityLv3obiparadise_purity

I love the story so much, the first chapter is amazing and makes you want to know more. Lisa is not very wise for lying, I really want to see how it all ends. I will create time and read all of it. I'm rooting for you, great job.

MaryahLu
MaryahLuLv11MaryahLu

Interesting story-telling. Everything about the male protagonist seemed dubious to me at time, and he was rather frightening. The female lead is engaging and definitely has her own appeal.

PerkyPompous_Pixie
PerkyPompous_PixieLv4PerkyPompous_Pixie

To those who enjoyed a first POV that is fast-paced, this is definitely it! Maybe it's because the POV is on first person, there is more tell than show. Overall, it's a different take on a mafia story. Interesting content tho. All the best, author!

Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4Moonwriting

The storyline of this book is quite captive...live the character of Lisa and Shane. I'm find myself loosing in the world. A captive read.. cheer up author..

_Rockbison_
_Rockbison_Lv3_Rockbison_

Although there is not many chapters uploaded but what l came to know after reading those few chapters are that it is a very funny and enjoyable story.... Our FL is quite dubm anf so she is funny and our ML is very nice and smart.... So they go with each other well..... Well writting and nice plot.... Hope u gonna have a great days ahead of urs author.....

Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Lv12Sweet_Vanilla553

Heelo hello, Author you have give us a lovely thing. I already done with the first chaps which were uploaded till now. Interesting. I love the way story is going on smoothly. Expect the author will give us more and more. You can do it. Keep going. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Joy_Michael_1063
Joy_Michael_1063Lv11Joy_Michael_1063

the story development is good and I like how the story is going I love your work keep it up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Forgetter_in
Forgetter_inLv2Forgetter_in

This book is lovely very captivating and engaging, I think I might have fallen for liso though, all together this is an amazing book, I highly recommend.

Sal_TarLeen
Sal_TarLeenLv1Sal_TarLeen

I love the story. Lisa is more frank than I expected, I like how clear the characters ideas are shown and the fast pace of the events. Shane seemed dark for real though. but Lisa should be wiser for her age, Lol

Ink_Quanta
Ink_QuantaLv12Ink_Quanta

Took an overview seems nice the story development and all as far as I have seen till now .....so yeah! I would say it's not bad ....so carry on

Emmanuel_Abraham_2079
Emmanuel_Abraham_2079Lv1Emmanuel_Abraham_2079

Honestly, this is one of the finest books I read this weekend. I love the story and its straightforward flow. It makes me want to keep going. The power of narration behind it and the lesson it teaches makes it great to read. I love it!

Mayline
MaylineLv4Mayline

I had a great time! There's some well-written comedy in there, and some little action with a pinch of this sort of high-school relationship broth Good mix! Good novel~~

Nancy_Jim
Nancy_JimLv12Nancy_Jim

This book is a very light read and overall fun to read and it is written in FIRST PERSON! The author of this book is amazing. Can't wait for this to climb up in the ranks. Good luck with Spirity🌹

HouseOfLee
HouseOfLeeLv13HouseOfLee

Oh dear me, something like this is definitely going to my reading library. I enjoy the writing and pace of the story, it’s quite lovely~ keep up the good work author.

Rainbow420
Rainbow420Lv3Rainbow420

I like this type of stories. Your story and book name is very fine. I enjoy it. Thank you.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Mochiix
MochiixLv1Mochiix

Amazing story. Truly wonderful. I love how the story unravels and the wonderful imagery that just paints a scene for me. Keep up the good work, Bravo!

invisible1
invisible1Lv1invisible1

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] this romance story is well written, i like the female characters, the conflict needs development, and i want to know if the ending will be sad or happy

Sani_Sunny
Sani_SunnyLv1Sani_Sunny

Very well written and established chapters, It just keeps getting better and better as you go through them and it's very rare to see that type of thing these days, Well done.

Novel_Dumre
Novel_DumreLv2Novel_Dumre

This book is the epitome of classic Teen -fiction and I am here for it, the author has taken me back to my teenage years watching movies, the small town is charming, the characters are relatable and I can't wait to see how it develops. Keep up the good work.