[img=recommend][img=recommend] Great story, I am looking forward to finding out how the main chacter achieve his aim. If you are looking for a little adventure this is the novel for you.
I like the story so far. The plot seems to be interesting, although a bit generic. There's something about the writing that just feels wrong to me though. it's not the grammar, nor the punctuation... I think it might be the flow of the story, actually. I'm not sure... Like, some words that are used to connect sentences or different and following events, they just don't sit right.... It's a good read tho! Just a bit uncomfortable for me to read...
keep writing n get better soon cuz i like mc [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What a nice book here, the chapters are nice and the book is attractive😍. Good job dear author please update more soon.乂❤‿❤乂乂❤‿❤乂乂❤‿❤乂乂❤‿❤乂♥(✿ฺ´∀`✿ฺ)ノ♥(✿ฺ´∀`✿ฺ)ノ♥(✿ฺ´∀`✿ฺ)ノ
The start of your story is superb. The plot of your story is so strong. The characters are well engaged. keep it up, Author. and waiting for the next anxiously.
amazing. more more more more more more🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Hey! I just found this novel to be remarkable. Because unlike other any protagonists, the main character in this novel is very aware of his surroundings, just like in Chapter 1. The grammar error is non-existent. Keep up the good work! Cheers!
Great novel with a pretty fun concept and plot. The author did their best with it and it's great to see. Enjoyed reading it and look forward to more like it.
I really like this novel. I must say this novel has great potential. The best part about it is the detailing. I'm sure that the author spends a great amount of effort. Keep going author!!!
Esto es una obra maestra, por fin encontré la maldad que tanto ansiaba ver, sigue y déjanos ver mas de esta gloriosa novela.
i need the link for the cover art it is too beautiful i know she is lumine from genshin but need the artist ............ ...................................................................
Great story and fast to read since the chapters are well written and short. Aushima sounds cool to me. I am looking forward to see what you have in store for the ML.
Yandere, need I say more? Wish it was longer but it is what it is.
Reveal spoiler
I waited and waited but I was just done at chapter 10. This is just forced bro, I m out. I should have just studied🤷
loved the character and was excited to see where this was going, then abrupt ending where it was a dream and the story was thrown out the window. disappointing
A good novel for new novel reader's. But to old reader's like me, let's just say not that good. The way the MC make the heroines fall in love is to "..." how should I put into words? Just go read yourself you will understand. Everyone has their own taste. So I won't say anything more.
Have you ever read a manhwa with a rush ending? This novel kinda shared the same prejudice but worse. Especially when MC still in the middle of the fight scene died and it was revealed that all his people that he had relations with were all dreams and then "The End" I'm not even joking. That's the ending. Not to mention there were several chapters near the ending that haven't been edited yet that hurt your eyes. Even when the author promised that he would edit those chapters, he still doesn't up until now.
this was one of the best novels on the app, my only complaint is how it ended 😔
This story had so much potential there were many things that were yet to shown the author had yet to introduce different kinds of races powerful empires a good plot focused on academy life demon queens powerful goddess Dragoness a cultivation world an extremely advanced futuristic empire the plot about earth Gates and many more if author you ever decided to continue this story again I have given some plots you could use and to the readers untill he changes the ending do not read it. and a Note to author: [it's better to leave the story unfinished then to go oh it was just a dream way. This will make readers trust on you go away and i am sure no author wants that after who are they writing stories for us reader] I wrote all this just to vent my frustrations don't mind me.