Reviews of Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
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It's a good novel, it has short chapters but has a fast update rate, just tries it maybe you would like it, Jejdjajfjekdkeosofjeosofdoti
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Now that we won bronze in wpc harem contest, I again writing this comment. Well there may be some little grammatical errors here and there as I rarely proofread and edit. But, majority of it is a smooth read. Since its my first book that I am writing, I can only say the quality will keep getting better and better with future chapters😊😊
Wasted potential.The first arc was a cliché but entertaining story by a clearly inexperienced, albeit promising up-and-coming author.It followed the tried and true trope of a reincarnator having to steal a son of luck protagonist's fate, with a fairly standard cast of characters (and yes, there are yanderes).The end of the first arc was where the story truly started to come into its own and showed flashes of brilliance, very successfullly expanding the world and upping the stakes, starting to build up a confrontation with the antagonist towards the end of the story. Unfortunately, this webnovel never managed to get there, suddenly entering a hiatus that lasted for months. By the time the novel came back, it rushed into a forced ending, disregarding all events in the story up to that point and breaking one of the most basic taboos in storytelling (it was all a dream...)Also worth noting that towards the end of the story the author remembered he was homophobic and decided to never forget again by reminding the reader every other chapter, spouting some of the most atrocious takes I've read, particularly in the sidestory
This is an interesting story to read(since I've only read a few novels like this). The writing quality is good so far there is nothing to complain about and seems to be improving(how I see it) as the story progresses. For story development I won't lie it was a bit boring in the beginning. It did become interesting in the latter half of the story though but so far so good. The character design is good I like how the 2nd rate mcs of the novel don't follow the usual trope which was surprising and how all the characters developed whether true the 'eyes' being opened or by see how the 2nd rate mcs treats those around them a good twist. World building is like other novels with your higher and lower worlds but it isn't to big of a problem as I see it but others might think otherwise. I wouldn't know about the updating schedule since most chapters were out when I started reading but it doesn't seem to be an issue as I've seen so far.
A great novel, whit a great Development this is nice piece of art. Just the development of the love of aushima an elandor the in the travel is very sudden, i recommend a rewrite whit a longer chapters, in that chapters elandor and aushima need to develop the relationship whit a distant start, elandor doing a slow brainwashing and the slow approximation between them, that it will be more realistic and better than the actual short. Ps: in need the link of the portrait. Ps 2.0: sorry for the bad English I'm an Argentinian :)
So much wasted potential, the first hundred chapters were great. If he just kept doing the same stuff, it would’ve been great, but in the last chapter, he suddenly decided it’s all a dream the end. He didn’t even bother to tie up loose ends. He basically stopped in the middle of the story and said it’s all a dream. I can’t describe how disappointed I am.
