Heavy Punch Winner
Honestly, I don't really know what to say. I was trying to read this book for a month now. I am at 7th chapter and it's so boring that reading it for more than 15 seconds without skimming is impossible for me. People here say that character is smart. And while I wouldn't call him stupid, he is definitely not smart. Many things he did were things that just could be done better, and with less work. System as usual is completely unnecessary. He could very well just unlock three talents and be done with it. His talent about beast taming seems best of the three, but it's barely mentioned. He doesn't even use it in fights with monsters. Hellfire is a glass cannon. There was another one but I forgot throughout this arduous month. It feels like I am not reading a fantasy book, but a documentary, and I was never good with lengthy tomes. There is no action, just work work and work. Translation is awful, to the point where mc can have 'a hole in his body' and then completely ignore it. There are 4 or more power systems, each describing the same thing differently. All in all, I should be paid to read this. Because this is work. And I'm not paying to be able to work.
Honestly a decent read, mc is young and like women that's normal, there seems to be a romantic relationship but it's done in a way that kinda makes sense, and is bearable. The mc is smart ,with a calm mind as the author points out to no end. However, there are some things about the novel that is confusing. The power system/ name for this book is very concluded. I am not sure if this is the author or translators fault but the names for power levels simply don't make sense and are changed midway at points. just ignore that and you get a decent read. Logistics is also an issue, although not a big one. There is only one blatant part where it doesn't really make sense. Mc goes out hunting for beasts, and keeps there remains for money. He has one storage ring with 500ml of storage (basically nothing). Yet he is still able to effortlessly continue hunting 50-100 of critters with the sisters over the course of a few days. I understand that the system provide him an inventory with 30 slots but even with some duplicates the number seem iffy, espicially with his other stuff already in there. The sisters are around also so how is there reaction to him storing the bodies, a lot of these basic logistic problems are ignored. Last thing is just the writing style, the author does both show and tell, which means a dialogue and then a sentence or two on its explanation and reasoning, can make for a pretty dry read at times. Overall still a decent read tho, mc is not insufferable and not too kind, but he also takes care of his friends. I like the system, and the super powers it's kinda cool. The skills mc have is interesting, I just hope that the author devolupes the other skills more in the future and not just focus on the hellfire skill. Especially beast taming that one can go so far in the world. 👍
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obvious MTL, can't keep simple things like you and me straight, there are lots of grammatical errors, god only knows which person is speaking in a conversation especially when more than two people are talking and then there's the story, name a cliché & it's included, characters are shallower than a spilled cup of water, party propaganda is randomly mixed in, elitism and aloofness abound.... it's just sad, how did this get recommended?
This review is only because the story is whitewashed. Use the fkin original name, what's so bad about that. As teacher Zhang one said, why should I use an english name. My name is Zhang Ye and thats the name my parents give me. Now the naming of the cultivation stories changed to Victor, Kevin and bloody White name
I hate that they changed the names to "Americanize it". The names they chose are very poor american names, and by that I mean you either don't ever see such a name used in real life OR even worse they use a Male's name for a female character. I couldn't continue after "Chris" the female blonde lady who clearly was going to be a reoccurring character.
I didn't really come here expecting for much ever since I saw the acting weak tag. The story isn't really refined. It feels like I'm reading the outline of the plot and not a complete story. The story isn't immersive either. There are many cringe scenes and the mc has hero syndrome and everyone else just follows.