started off good. but by chapter 200 i quickly lost interest. it wasnt really about his system anymore, just a forced story/plot
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I HAVE TO SAY THAT THIS IS A PRETTY GOOD BOOK BUT IT DEFINITELY CAN BE BETTER!! I JUST GOT DONE WITH CHAPTER 52!! I THINK HE SHOULD HAVE TOLD EVERYONE THAT HE HAS 3 POWERS NOW BECAUSE HES STRONG ENOUGH TO PROTECT HIMSELF AND IF HE CANT THEN THE SCHOOL WILL BE ABLE TO HELP TOO!! AND I THINK HE SHOULD HAVE AT LEAST RANKED UP IN THIS HOLE TIME THAT THE MONSTER HORD WAS COMING IF NOT THERE WHEN HE WAS IN THE CAVE AND HE WAS OUT OF POWER HESHOULD HAVE HAVE DON IT!!!
overall a great book. some plot holes. they story changed alittle thru out the book to fit the story line and amp it up some.
The story has a good premise. It's just that the plot holes make it less readable.
I was happy to have the chance to read this story.
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Absolute forced trash of a concept, why is this garbage here in the first place.
It was hands down one of best books I have read on Webnovel it was amazing following vincent on his adventures. I wished it had continued more but it was a good book and great characters and development in storyline!!!!
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disregard the stars and DON'T READ. The story is interesting to me. the pronouns get mixed for two characters that have the same name. as of September '22 you can't unlock chapters you have to buy the WHOLE REST OF THE STORY. I was enjoying it.
It takes a lot for me to drop a book for purely the translation quality, in fact I can’t think of ever doing that. This is by far the worst written novel I’ve come across. It takes a special kind of stupid to even understand what is being said let alone enjoy it
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Pretty good. Although I believe they made the main character too smart. It did make for a good read and laughs at times. Especially towards the end.
The novel started out okay. The first 2 chapters were nice. Then boom. Harem candidate #1 shows up and leads the plot to nowhere. How can you see someone and not be infatuated with them, Then right after your shower when you see them blush. Infatuation comes up. Such nonsense Later on, after a few chapters. Harem candidate #2 shows up and just makes it obvious that this guy is destined to be a simp. Not just any simp, A 3 S-class talent simp
Is this actually done? Like there's two chapters locked behind premium so I'm not sure if it's done so I don't wanna actually start reading it yet...
Some novels here are so bad with their grammar that you know it's some guy or gal from an Asian country who thinks they can translate novels just because they took some English classes in school. This novel is a different kind of bad where it's an machine translation and the editor tries to edit it to sound Western. So all the Chinese names turn into English names. That's not a problem in itself but when the editor starts running out of imagination, the English names of characters/places also run out of imagination and sound like something strung together from glancing around the room. And then the editor doesn't read what they are editing at times so sentences contradict each other, i.e. something costs 3 million coins and is priceless. Or there's a hole in the MC's body but the next sentence says that he suffered no damage, and the next chapter says there was a hole. There was even a paragraph describing levels of powers and I tried reading it a few times and still couldn't understand it. And of course there's a comment explosion for it. So basically, this novel is one where I started losing brain cells after reading because it contradicts itself so much and you cannot understand what it's saying. I say give it a try to read the comments from others but don't try too hard in case you become dumber in real life.
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one cultivation level is called beginner super-powered person... that should explain many things but if it doesn't then just read first chapter and you'll find 15 sentences that are cliche. cliche means a development of a story is a overused concept but here you'll read a sentence and say "that's cliche". Fifteen of them. in the first chapter