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It seems to be a translation of a Chinese fanfic, I can't be sure without the author confirming it because it's well translated. Unfortunately the characters seem to act based on Chinese society, even in the US, other than that the symbol used for lines (eg 'speech') is commonly used for thoughts in most novels/fanfics and this makes everything a little weird. Writing isn't very natural either. The story isn't engaging and doesn't feel realistic to read. It feels kind of artificial (it's hard to describe the feeling) it's not a quality issue but a writing style issue.
I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness. I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness. I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness.
-The updates are good considering you have it set to a countdownβ¦. -The story is kinda good -But the worst is the Chinese elements that donβt translate well into English Americans do not act like this at allβ¦. Itβs confusing and frustratingβ¦ We donβt call an old man a Respected Elder -You get what Iβm implying -The story idea is great -You need to get an English born editor thatβs fluent in Chinese or your native language to translate it and fix it into an American or English grammatical way of speaking. -Thanks for the Story
This story is from very perceptive and I like it this is going to grow something more and something else. Keep this story on the road this is a gem as we explore the multi verse with you finding different possibilities because multiverse is infinite and there are many surprises coming your way. Love it...β€
chinese translation , nomatter how good translations are you can always tell from the stupid Chinese saying and idioms that come in every one. the chapter order are sometimes mixed , sometimes,especially the mc is called a she instead of he , its a interesting book but I dislike the typical Chinese mc , he disappeared for 3 months on his semi girlfriend, she waits for him , he returns and says hi then goes off to train for another month yet the girl is still with him , gives me flashbacks to scum che from ATG
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