Gamma420
50 chapter and I am loving it. great character building. I like how people simply think and not some deep **** that can be thought up in a second. I like the way the MC is op and still not some duce-bag. killing around people and no immediate romance, but like the way of flirting. A great recommendation to anyone searching science vs magic theme with great storyline.
Good start to an interesting idea, and it’s good up to about 3/4 of the story, then it goes downhill unfortunately. A genetically engineered soldier from a technological culture crashes on a magical world. Isekai scenario. He uses his advanced technology to defeat the various magic things, and the magic system gets a pretty good explanation. He then proceeds to hack the magical system, although that isnt developed as much as it could be. So far so good, but then the story progresses and I won’t spoil it for you, but the main problem is that the remaining 1/3 of the book feels rushed and ideas are not developed but instead just happen at a breakneck pace. My biggest issue though is that the ending is a real bummer, which is a logical way to end the story, but again feels rushed and doesnt do the story or character any justice. What a disappointing end to a good start.
Overrated The MC does not act like a soldier at all but a stupid kid even after regaining some of his memory as soldier. No common sense. A highly ai that can deny the master request because of confidential data or priority of mission but is too stupid to withhold the mc from giving sensitive information. The mc gives information for free. For example, I am immortal but I need nanites to survive. Why would the mc told others about the nanites? So that others party has the information that the regeneration ability is due to something called nanites which the mc also told that he is lacking it? Or what about hey you have magic? How about I told you how to improve magic to be super effective for free that can even melt my ship heat shield? Not caring about advancing that empire to the point of able to conquer a world at all but also tell them oh we have a treaty that will wipeout a specie that seems dangerous. What about a more common sense treaty like withholding information from low level civilization? 20-30chapters in with all these stupid illogical sense. Furthermore, forcing women in the story. Forcing conversation that makes the mc and character in the story even more stupid.
I read this novel until CH 48 and this is my review. Too much "F*cking" or "F*ck" words to read, I don't know who put that word, Author or someone else. As for me, read too much "bad words" become not comfortable to read and ruin a good character in the story, this what I think. Please improve writing quality and reduce "bad words" even more. This is a good story, I love the plot and I like the character, it will be perfect to reduce using "that" words.
Placeholder review -- I am writing after reading 100 chapters but I just cannot stand the character development. Author needs an editor and proofreader, but that is commonplace and not a big issue, what I care about is getting to know the author's idea, which is very well planned out in the world-building, plot-development, and story-pacing aspects. The exception is the character design, which I am uncomfortable with, at least up to the chapter 100-milestone, my opinion may change when I pick up this story again. My compliments to the author though, for keeping me interested to the rest of his story even though I completely hated his protagonists.