Reviews of Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world
Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world
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Wonderfully written story with a well developed and well thought out main character. He is Ruthless when necessary without being psychotic or needlessly cruel like most ******* authors make their character, and can also be kind as well. A character with true depth.
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I don't like it. Firstly he doesn't act like a hardened soldier, he acts like typical isekei mc who helps people and behaves un-realistically for a soldier. I mean he is a being engineered for WAR!! but then he meets 2 random locals fights them, then heals them and then jokes around with them. He compromised his position like that and then offers the local technology and other help just like that. It would make more sense for him firstly to observe how the world works (incognito!!) before interacting like that and making promises. Moreover, if he has a huge technological advantage he doesn't need compromise with weaklings again he is an engineered sci-fi (supersoldier). You should not made the mc as a soilder but maybe as a diplomat or somthing then I would understand,
OK - first let me start by saying that I love sci-fi novels (and that I think this novel is a gem, and deserves more credit than it's getting). I also happen to love fantasy novels. But what I really, really love are novels that manage to blend these two genres together creating an entertaining, well-written, action-packed, science <3's magic, totally amazing story. And that, my friends, is exactly what this author puts out. The characters are interesting, little to no grammatical errors, not to mention a sometimes hilarious, sometimes action/gritty, holistically amusing story-line! And as a bonus feature, the author seems to have a background in science and combat?? Regardless, the author sprinkles cool sounding combat and science-techno jargon throughout the story; while I'm not sure any of it's correct, it sounds frickin' awesome. Keep the good work, dear author, and I'll keep reading!
This could be such a good novel if it wasn’t filled with unnecessary info-dumps, there are so many details that nobody cares about! In this novel there is an interesting story and the author knows what he he writing about and on Webnovel this is quite rare, but the story is so filled with info-dumps that it becomes too slow and boring. It should be entirely rewritten and all the chapters should have at least half the length, and the story would be still slow. All of this without considering the bad grammar that makes the reading process even more exhausting.
The story is really unique and attention grabbing. It started of pretty good and from then it just spiraled down hill. The author started by switching up the MC persona to some Isekai BSed that was really throwing me off considering our MC is a harden soldier was in charge of annihilating planets 🪐 and solar systems. It just didn’t fit...the image. Overkill of information that was really unnecessary to the story. EVERY female in this story is just a copy and paste like they are either meek or a loud mouth that just add on to the fillers. Story had a great potential and the author simply failed in the delivery. If you can stomach the typical tropes , isekai , female lead you’ll soon forget the name of in need of saving then by all means go for it!
I was pretty confused with the dialogues of some characters in this novel. This novel has full potential, if the author has someone to proofread his works and help him make the story easy to read. Also there are some aspects in the MC that is lacking, like he is a soldier but the aura he gives off in the first chapters is more like an Isekai MC which he is not. The story could have been perfect if the MC has atleast someone survived with the ship. But still it has a Unique concept 0_0
My opinion based my current progress (ch 36). Story has really good potential. Characters seem interesting, the same can be said about world setting. Unfortunately there is one huge minus to this story - number of mistakes in chapters is really high. It's understandable to make them but so far it looks like chapters are not checked even oncebefore publication.
Soooo, I think i just droped 25€ worth of Crystals on the Book and am now up to date. This Book hits a Sweetspot i didnt think i have. Fantasy/Sci-Fi with a lot of short but rich explanation of the World an its Weapons, with an awesom cast of main charakters. While some might not like the near op Protagonist, i think its well explained why he xan survive what he goes through. What might annoy the most is the sentece structure: Example: As them it annoys them. Example end. It happens more often than you think. All in all: Its an AWESOME ride and you should enjoy it! **: I cant wait for the next chapter. please faster T_T
