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Star Wars:The cold red eyes

{A Star Wars Fanfiction} This story is following a Chiss boy growing up at the times of the New republic. This is going to be kinda AU Fanfiction some ideas of my fantasy some of kanon stuff and some legends stuff so don't wonder. I look forward to suggestions for improvement and constructive criticism. DISCLAIMER: •I do not own anything only my oc. •If there is any problem about the cover please send me a message i'll delte it. •I have a very bad spelling and i'll mostly use the translater so pls blame me not this much. •This is my first Fanfiction and i'm not 100% sure if i going to keep up writing. •Don't expect regular updates i do it because i'm bored.

Erdzan_21 · Sci-fi
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Chapter 13

Dato POV

Year 3273 lothal calendar

Planet:Csilla, Csplar

After a short time James and Uzui's chauffeur arrived and we made our way to the gliders."

"See you soon folks" says Hanna to Taron Mei and Uzui because they drive in the other glider.

Taron waves to us as he steps on board.

"Nice to see you again young master, I hope you had a good first day. So where do you want to go?" James asks me when we are seated.

"I think this day can be called an interesting day so please drive us to the shopping mall we will spend some time there So please contact my parents too" I tell him.

"So I'm on my way to the shopping center. By the way, your mother told me to call in, she's worried sick" James tells me in a caring tone as he starts to drive.

"Of course". I say and immediately pull out the comlink

"It seems he has a caring family" thought Hanna when she heard about it

I take the comlink and call my mother she picks up the phone straight away and asks in a tone that makes it clear that she was very concerned

"Honey are you okay? Answer already, did you have an accident??, If so, I'll turn this damn droid into a toaster"

"It's fine mother I'm in the glider and James is concentrating on flying I'm sitting here with a girl from my unit so let's talk later" I'm trying to delay the conversation

"A-a g-girl?, Are you already this old, Jlurd'aluwo'tosago I want you to come back now right away, girls only want bad things ther are like poison" My mother says the first part hesitantly and the other part quickly

Not a second later, Hanna's face turns red

"Mum what are you talking about? We will speak later when I'm home, Goodbye" I say and hang up

'It's a strange vibe' I think to myself as we both look out the windows

"By the way... Thanks" Says Hannah

"Thanks for what?" I ask her and think about what good I've done

"Well, that with the hot chocolate, My family has a better use of money these days so I can't afford any big luxuries" She says and you can tell that she's embarrassed

"Oh, that's not a problem, we're a unit, so I think you should be able to rely on others."I tell her and grin at her and give her a smile

After looking me in the face for a few seconds, she looks straight out the window again and asks "When are we there?"

"Right away" james tells her

On this day i had a amazing day with my unit, my new friends.

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That's it. I would appreciate feedback and a few power stones to motivate myself to drop some more stuff.

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That's it. I would appreciate feedback and a few power stones to motivate myself to drop some more stuff.

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