13 I need your suggestions(Not a chapter)

I just want to ask your opinion on this case. I started writing this novel on a whim because I was bored. I didn't expect you all to read this lol. But since you are, I want to recreate this story from the beginning. I'm just starting to realize how many stupid plot holes I have left, and I myself feel like this shit is boring...So what are your thoughts on that case. The story hasn't changed that much and I feel like I'm just writing the same novel with extra side character. So I was thinking to recreate this shit.

I'll leave this message here and I'm still more inclined toward recreating this story, But I want to hear you people's thought on this. Comment below..

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I was thinking about making an incest, not between son and mother, but brother and sister...Then I got a thought...If there were two humans at the beginning, they probably fucked each other to create more humans...like son fucked the mother, father fucked the daughter, they all fucked each other....then aren't we all like related...in a wayyyyyyy to distantly but still.......like are we all doing incest....?

Nevermind....

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