Skilled & Insecure

The story features many points of view. But the Main character is Homu, a girl whose life has been derailed and now is on her own. With her newly acquired ability she tries to find a place in the world and maybe some answers. The story switches between her past and the presence, as well as various point of views each chapter. Disclaimer I started writing this story in my free time about a year ago in order to vent some of the ideas that hat accumulated in my head. Naturally does writing not equal thinking, therefore I grew increasingly disappointed with the story. It still is the first “Novel-like” story I wrote of that size, therefore I would like to share it. And even though it probably is still unpolished (and will most likely never get polished nor finished) I would love some feedback (apart from friends). Maybe someone feels like roasting or just likes to give critique. I would be really thankful.