-The MC wants to be a merchant, not pirate, marine but merchant. interesting, and seeing he wants to explore I assume author will add new ****, he has done this in the starting chps, more would be nice. new places, new characters, etc.
-So far mc isnt a retard, actually he is smart, dude plans and did a smart get rich quick scheme. dope. A smart MC is always dope, especially a smart merchant.
-The power, this MC's power is [spoiler] the power of bartering..ie: trading. And from a certain perspective this is an OP superpower, like it can contend with the reality altering type powers, BUT its drawback is its unique conditions to work and also depends on the intelligence of MC. so dope, a power suited for MC. dude can trade anything or buy anything [under the right condition]
-Not exactly a lot so far, but whatever is here is interesting. No retarded rushed moments, no stupid MC, no super god MC. Whatever happened the author more or less explained with a ' logical ' reason. nice.
-the only fault might be the time, its close to cannon. maybe a few months or a year or 2 before cannon, considering in C8 its stated ACE ate the DF. But if author dosnt follow cannon/main cast...then its fine
suggestion: keep MC smart, more moments of intelligence [like his get rich quick scheme]. look at the world with a somewhat realistic perspective rather than an anime like the OG. dont make MC a naive retard/ friendly hero. if romance, build, take it slow and no useless sluts. dont follow cannon or be a fan boy.
anyway GL. u have a interesting bk
[I just gave 4/5 since u said updates will be slow] otherwise 5
