JennyS
I found your book by chance and after reading the synopsis I tried to read it. And I like it. Although it's not clear when and where the story is, I still like it. After all, this is a fiction story, I just follow the author's adventure πππ Author, I hope you get well soon so there will be another update π€π Thanks.
Though I do enjoy the novel and could give it a full score, I still want to be fair in my review. What drags down the score is the writing quality (sloppy mistakes and lack of proofreading) and the unstable updates. I also have a slight dislike towards the MC because of her ridiculous self-righteousness, constantly having to be politically correct and help everyone around her like a humanitarian goody-two-shoes. It's a little suffocating and also a little unrealistic that a human can and is willing to be that sacrificing and helpful. BUT, that's just my personal opinion about the MC. Now to the good parts about the novel. The world background is well built and the author keeps surprising and expanding the novel's world in a steady flow that seems natural. The other characters surrounding the MC also have their fair share of scenes and aren't just fillers to prop the MC. They have depth and their own life stories that intertwine with the MC to move the storyline forward. So, despite my medium-rated score, I'd still urge others to give the novel a try.ππ»β€οΈπ
This book is different. It started as historical story, transited to multiverse and multiworld war and it has cultivation base. Even tho the writer might have made multiple grammatical mistakes, I can still follow with my poor English skills the whole story. Do not put it on translation, as it has few errors if you speak any English. All in all I love it. <3
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