Mr. Yan
DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT TO END ON CLIFFHANGER WITH NO CONTINUATION. Writing was pretty good plotwise but they abandoned this story on a cliffhanger. Their other book with the same title is not remotely related to this, but it was updated 9hrs ago and this hasn't been updated in over a month. It WAS marked incomplete but after a month it got changed. Honestly disappointed in the author for not giving an explanation. I thought maybe they had something in their outside life, but they're still updating other works with crazy amounts of chapters.
This book is incredibly addictive! It has quickly become my favorite story across all the different reading apps I use. if you are worried about reading the same old tropes over and over again, this is the book for you. It is fresh and amazing to read. The characters have more under the surface than meets the eye. I especially love that the female lead is not a pushover, and that her past traumas do not weaken her. can't wait to see where the rest of the story goes, so I hope you will read along with me!
I don't know why I keep reading this novel.The plots is nice but I really can't stand the stupid misunderstandings they aren't really necessary .Also the female lead is just to much, even if she is sick not with that yawning everytime and laziness it's boring. The novel could have been great if the author could not exaggerate too much. Maybe it could be done by now.I wish to know the name of the original novel, if this is duplicate cause I dropping this one.#Cliffhanger.
This a review full of complaints First of all, for a story that complains almost the main characters and their kids to be geniuses the story and character execution seems dumb to me. The amount of misunderstanding that even a simpleton could have guess at was stretch so much that the characters now seem dumb despite the fact that they were geniuses. They're not dumb actually but there are more smarter stories out there with MCs that never claims to be geniuses but the things they do, their thought processes and actions constitutes a smart move. While this book like to fish more chapter through absurd words of stupid reason and chances where the author can justify why the misunderstanding or mystery was still not apparent to the characters. It was actually okay at the start as the mystery and amount of misunderstanding can be a good plot to read but when it spans for hundreds of chapters of stupid reasons and chances, the book quality suffers. It might be okay if they are just normal simple people but they are abnormally genius people, that's what was written by the author. Sadly, they are not acting like it. The worst part is when around the 150th chapters, the author just stops to create reason and just let the characters act like an actual fool who was so oblivious to the obvious signs that was glaring in shining letters in front of them. Really disappointing. It really lowers the credibility of the story. Sigh. I didn't even sleep till it was 1 PM in the afternoon just to read the first chapters. I read this as 4 am which was near my sleeping time. The start was promising but it gone downhill afterwards. Also, the MC just became uncaring with her daughter and sons after she knew about the existence of her son, like all she did was sleep and spend less time and effort to care to them. Which was not the case from the early chapters, she was a loving and caring mother there but the author neglects her. Don't even talk about the romance. It was unconvincing and very disappointing. If the author does not focus on faceslapping that spans from tens of chapters to chapters, the romance part could have been made properly. The author suddenly decided to just let them feel in love with each other without sufficient backing of it. Like the author realizes that she forgot the mc as a mother and has a lovelife and just botched some chapters to fill this hole. DISSAPONTING. I'm thinking of dropping it. It's decided, Im gonna drop it already. It brought dissatisfaction and frustration than the joy and thrill when I was reading it's first chapters.
So drawn out for no reason. Repetitive writing throughout. It's a cute story but completely unrealistic. This book needs an editor!! No one drives from New York to Cali in 5 hours. Also, is alternative medicine practicioners really getting the feathers ruffled enough for a public debate with modern medicine practicioners? Plus why are you charging for this book when it can be read for free on Wattpad? Aren't u just stealing people's money for something that is free?