2 Test? (Rewrite)

(POV Tanaka)

And I was getting sucked by the black thing. Oh!, Wait that came out wrong.

After some time,

I couldn't figure out how much time as I felt half awake. My senses were dull.

However, I felt something pull me

Finally, regaining my sense,

I opened my eyes to be greeted by a black space

I couldn't see anything

I even questioned if I really opened my eyes or if my brain playing a trick on me?

Wait, do I even have a brain, or am I still a ghost?

I don't know, I can't see my body in this darkness.

Oh! I can 'Move' or fly.

I began 'Looking' around the black void, hoping to find something.

However, even after a long time of exploring in the void, nothing

Absolutely nothing

Well, even there was something, I am not sure if I can 'see' it.

'Hmm, this is boring'.

There is nothing in here

Finally, after god knows how much time I see something

oh! A light?

In the darkness?

How convenient!

Despite my sarcastic thoughts, I moved towards the light in a hurry

There is nothing better to do

Oh? The light is coming here?

Oi slow down, you will crash into me

Oh! shi-

(Third POV)

Before our MC could even react, he was enveloped in the light and lost consciousness.

Opening his eyes in another unfamiliar place

He can only sigh out loud

He looked at his surroundings

He found himself in a completely white space

It couldn't be called a room due to its huge space

The only thing that was notable in the white space was the stairs in front of him

The stairs seemed extremely long he can barely see anything however he can make out a circle shape with his limited vision

"Hello there," a voice echoed in the empty white space

The voice carried power

"H-hello…" Greeted Tanaka with a stutter

He can't see the source of the voice!

Added with the fact he hasn't spoken to anyone for a long time, so he was extremely surprised and stunned

However, he quickly composed himself

He had many questions

"Who are you? And where are you? In fact wher-" Said Tanka as he began asking endless questions

"Slow down kid, I will explain everything after you get up here," said the deep voice cutting Tanka out of his inner monologue

"Up?" Asked Tanka as he didn't know what the voice was talking about

"Up the stairs, kid, are you blind?" mocked the voice

Tanaka had a vine on his forehead

however, it disappeared as he remembered to check on his body

Checking on his body, Tanka was disappointed, as his body was still transparent

He was still a ghost or a soul

He can only sigh at his misfortune

"Can't you just explain things from here?" Said Tanaka, being the lazy b he is

'He is going to say 'No' isn't he' Was the thought of Tanaka

"No, I don't think I will, come here BOI," answered the voice

As Tanaka sighed

He did the thing that most people would do

Sit down on the white ground

and ignore the voice

(2 Days later)

Tanaka got bored and stood up

Walking towards the stairs, Tanaka sighed.

He raised his legs and began walking up the stairs

as soon as his legs landed on the first slap, he felt a slight pressure on his body

Tanaka realized that the more he moved up the stairs, the higher the pressure on his body

which made him remember some of the novels he used to read

"Yeah, it is the same we weren't creative enough to create anything new," said the voice with a bored tone as if it read his mind

"Wait, you can read my mind? And where were you in the past 2 days?"

"…"

"…"

The voice didn't answer

"Sigh" Tanaka let out a loud sigh and began cursing his misfortune

As he climbed higher

His knees trembled

His legs felt weak

His body felt extremely heavy

He gritted his teeth and continued to climb despite the ever-increasing pressure

(2 Hours Later)[Cringe incoming]

Tanaka has been going at it for 2 hours

He can barely feel his legs or his body for that matter

his vision became fuzzy

He began to feel sleepy

As his body gave out,

His life began playing in front of him

Truth be told, he had the same experience when Truck-kun sends him flying

The feeling of hopelessness and despair

He was weak

He could do nothing

He began closing his eyes as if accepting his fate

However, a desire to live

A desire exploded from his very soul

It seems to affect the surroundings

As the pressure on his body decreased,

On top of the stairs was a white-haired man with a smile on his face looking at Tanaka, who seems struggling to get up

"Interesting," said the White-haired man

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(Author note)

Just want to clear things here there will be some changes but nothing too big some chapter won't be edited

Also, he isn't lazy Tanaka

Well I mean he is lazy, but he is not Tanaka himself

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