It's honestly a good short story if we set aside the problem in grammar and sudden scene changes. I do hope that could be fixed, though, to get the whole feeling to the story. Anyway, I love how they confronted the problem. I admire that Leonid was so mature after it all. I do think that they all had their mistakes in the whole scenario, but who doesn't make mistakes. They all own up to it at the end and clear up all the bad blood.
Love it once I started reading it. Couldn’t put it down, I really got into the Daddy part of it all. His dad was making me wish I was the daddy daughter.! The way you wrote it, just had me so I grossed that had me doing all the things he was doing to her. Mmmmmm! Love it from start to finish. Thank you and I’ll be looking for another book.