Sunny_Shumail
Oh My God! What a masterpiece! Everything, from plot, writing style, story line, and characters to execution, everything is seamlessly perfect. The story is intriguing. Inclusion of different POVs is unique. The plot is shrouded in mystery, ensnaring and captivating the reader, urging him/her to keep reading. I would love to recommend it!
This story has great elements and is beautifully written reading it was effortless. I was obsessed with the characters, the plot, the intensity of emotions, action, and fantasy elements of this novel. I would for sure read a sequel or beg for a few side stories. It is a satisfying read that screans more from the author here or in future novels! ššššš
Just eight chapters and I feel like I'm in a Cinema, everything is so well explained that I don't need a dictionary to comprehend, I'm I love with the main character already as he emotions are well played out. if I write everything I love about this book down just after 8 chapters it'll be like 2k words so I'll keep it simple. I . ..love. .. this. ..book
The grammar and writing is flawless! Although Iābe only read the first few chapters, it had already gotten me hooked to the story. Usually I never read FL stories but I gotta say, this oneās pretty amazing. The stability of chapters published is a big plus. The character of Serene reminds me of the fickleness of youth, wanting to explore the world outside but not truly knowing the gravity of it. The world building is also fantastic and leaves room for a lot of imagination and anticipation for the reader. Overall, this is a great book and I would highly recommend it to readers! Keep up the amazing work, Sunny!
hello, a casual reader here. I am at ch 49 , and i will leave it here for it to stack. i am already a huge sucker for academic arcs and tags and this one really delivers it and the characters....just read it...that's all i can say. i really enjoyed my read to the point that i added it to my library. what do i say, kudos to the author and i am really interested to see what happens with serene, especially the mysteries surrounding the wall. anyways, good luck to the author with his future direction of the story.
Wow! Just wow! Very well written and interesting story. The world building is fascinating and really well done... You are updating daily and also the story has a really great flow. I like how the realms and various races that inhabit them interact, I still don't know how you will make it work as it seems pretty difficult to me allready, but I have great expectation for this novel. Keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update]