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When initially reading this story, it reminds me of the novel, 'A Slight Smile is Very Alluring.' It is fantastic and overtime, it separates itself from the novel I mentioned and shows it's own charm. I really like the writing style. It is smooth and easy to read. The details put are also outstanding as I could clearly picture each character in my head. The characters are also very fun, especially Xixi. She reminds me of Er Xi. Additionally, there is also definite chemistry between the main characters and the romance doesn't seem forced. The interaction and conversations Mo Hua and her friends (and any character really) are also natural which is very very good. hahah This novel is great! I recommend any romance fans to give this one a try! :)
Hey Readers, 5/5 from my side. Romance, Friendship, and Comedy are at its best. A very well written plot. Auther had described those brief moments of love and friendship with great care. The addition of the MMORPG inside a romantic genre adds an exclusive contrast to the story that will attract many readers. A good job must say. The author's way of writing and describing character's personalities and traits adds the final blow to the hearts of readers and romance lovers. Do give this one a try. The Author and the story will not disappoint you. Thanks
I am sadly not so much for romance. But nevertheless, every book deserves a chance! I read it and the title and the way the story flows reminds me of the western movie: "Serendipity" but with a twist. They're gamers! This just shows that we gamers have a chance to find got girls too!!!! Ahahaha but yes, I liked the way it was written but sometimes I get confused as to who this character is and so on? Probably because I'm not used to chinese names so that's just me 😊 Please do keep up the good work!
A refreshing romance story that could easily be scripted into a TV series. Author did a great job in that perspective as I was about to imagine to scenes vividly. The characters are interesting and the pacing is smooth and easy. I think the only problem, and what docked a few points in my review, are the grammar errors. There are missing articles (a, an, the) in front of nouns and commas missing before or after names. Unfortunately, it breaks the immersion as I'd find myself constantly pausing and re-reading a sentence to find out what was missing. To the author, the simplest way to fix these errors is to get Grammarly. It comes with a Google Chrome extension which works with inkstone, meaning you can edit it in your browser and update it instantly, all from webnovel's platform. Other than that, the story was great. It's sweet and lighthearted and actually kinda soothing, cleansing for the soul. Especially after watching or playing a round of depressing or high ******* movies or games
Dear author, I really like your work. The story really flows well and the way you describe thing is amazing. The romance doesn't feel forced, its all very organic from the way they started getting interested in each other to how they met. You write very well, I didn't see a single spelling mistake or misplaced word. All the descriptions are vivid and the interactions are natural like hearing real people talking. Good work 👏
Your story is really good, funny, going at a good pace, and nice flowing writing style. I personally do not like romance, so this story isn’t for me, but for anyone who enjoys, I say it is a good read. I also like how you not only tell the girls part of the story, but also the guys. I like the world you created, it is good. Keep up the good work!
Games are not my cup of tea, but this sure is! The first few chapters gives you the general idea of the author's capabilities in terms of writing and behold! She's a master. Everything's perfect, even the flow of the story and also the interactions. The character and plot advancements are also well made, I hope to see more