Alanala
In my professional consumer opinion the author did a great job in keeping the novel interesting considering that most other novels have cool training and getting stronger parts but the rest is just dry copy pasted comedy but this one has both interesting during training and none training parts so that you don’t get bored or question if it’s worth reading..... Now that said the novel does have some downsides and that can never be avoided BUT compared to other novels this shines in that it is a very minimal amount instead of you questioning why the mc only has two brain cells to rub together and is somehow smarter than everyone else. All in all I’d say that it is a good read and there were some parts where I couldn’t wait to continue reading
This book seems to have the foundations of a great book but is let down by poor writing. if you want to see what I mean I've left comments in the first chapter. another thing is the way speech is handled, having the name after every speech is disjointing. try to build the speech into the sentences. the name after style could then be used for greater effect in confusing fight scenes or when lots of aside characters are talking. Also in general work on the way you express ideas. eg aghh its my alarm is both a unnatural thing to say and disjointing. instead he jolted awake, realizing the dragon roars were in fact his alarm clock. This only an example, there's many ways to do it but this book has a lot of potential if you go back and rewrite it.
yeah I did what you said right now and now review time this novel is really great for beginners and for people that read alot but to criticize to much because some people have said it's a bunch of cliches but if you add different cliches together you might just a really good book like how right now nova has a mysterious family and all he knows is he's related to the first king and he wants to get stronger to help reishnied (sorry if i got it wrong i did it off memory ) and help himself with other things don't know yet but we're going to see
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