Second World
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
This novel is wonderful. The background is very developed, almost everything as a meaning in his own. Every character has is ambition and behaviour. Finally the writing itself is reaaally good : every scene has details. Another good point is the speed of the story. The world is moving and we, readers, feel it. Very good job :)
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I am really enjoying this book. I just got to chapter 100 so now I am having to slow down the reading because I am out of fast passes lol. Really enjoying it though. you have my power stones for the next few months lol.
Overall the story is great. Distinct characters with their own voices. The antagonists are a little cookie cutter, always, “Who is this nobody? I’m the greatest”. The universe is interesting, though still filled with mystery. The only complaint I really have is that grammer needs work.
Story, characters and world development are too simple/lacking/empty !!!! i will wait to read your next book because its netherless a good start for a writer. . . . .
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the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section
the story is much more good than other stories in the recommended section but I don't know why those story is much higher in voting....... try to read the others in recommended section