Reviews of Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

This novel is 10/10.

The story is very good, but everything else is too boringly thought out. The story is very good, but everything else is too boringly thought out.

Chapters are too short, and there are too many authors notes that inflate the word count. Grammar is not great, please download grammarly and/or go over the chapters again. Authors don’t just write a chapter and never correct it, they edit multiple times before they publish it. You need to do the same and edit your chapters. The MC grew too powerful too quickly, and 6+ info-dump chapters was painful. I do like the Fic, though I wish you’d do better in terms of grammar.

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oh well grammar aside,...... Well MC is OP even before entering the wizarding world. Let's see how this goes... The adventures of a family loving , OP MC at HOGWARTS

Люблю фанфики про попаданцев в мир Гарри Поттера. Особенно когда нету плохого и у гг есть счастливая семья. Поскорее бы автор делал нам новые главы. Советую почитать вам.

Interesting fanfic. Unusual abilities of the hero, interestingly described family. The relationship of the parents brings a smile. Quite a lot of humor in the chapters written, I hope there will be no "dark" further.

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in grammer you have a very common problem specifying things with he and her this mistake was in chapter 2 or 3 maybe I don't remember there are others too but it will take some time to specify them and something not adding up is like isn't he using wandless magic too effortlessly wandless magic mentioned rarely in even og but he is doing very easily and on top of that conjuring element left and right. this story is missing something I would give this story 3.8/5 for nice pace of story and little creative thinking and author's effort

I haven’t read it yet but since it is a hp Fanfic, i’ll giFt you 5 star ⭐️. Good lUck author sama![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

honestly a great book and worth the read. the story has a great flow and pacing, and om excited to see where it goes. . . . . . . . . . . . .

It starts pretty good and fast paced, although the MC's rapid progress doesn't have a great explanation and feels unjustified. But the big problem comes the moment he starts at Hogwarts. The story just slows down to a crawl with unnecessary excruciatingly detailed explanations of every little thing the MC does. 50 chapters of nothing interesting happening and little to no progress in the story becomes normal. The MC also seems to also loose his motivations to become stronger like protecting his family or changing the wizard world to stop discrimination and he basically becomes a normal slightly more talented student who doesn't train much and barely has any progress in his abilities. If you want to read a slice of life novel without much action in the HP world you might still like this one but if you expect anything to happen you will probably be dissapointed.

i like it but the mystery about the beast magic he has is more annoying then intriguing. he cant use it. Its actually hindering him more then helping him. And it only com up twice ij 200 chapters.... thats too long to stretch a mystery. Without clues. or explanation. or resolution. 200 chapters makes it annoying every time you bring it up. Just focus on the story cause your characters beast power sucks.

SO CRINGE it felt like I was gonna die out of embarrassment just by reading if someone saw me reading this they would laugh at me 😂 😂 (Author no offence but this fanfic is not for me..)..... (Story development and world background is great but you have to change your writing style, less cringy lines)....

Hey i am a new reader of the book and i want to know if the author forgot about the books and diary he found in the room of requirements

Whoo, I'm back here after a million years. If you want my opinion on this novel, I would say that it is a wonderful and excellent novel, and author Nim puts his effort into it, unlike some other specific writers. I advise everyone to read the novel themselves and get their own opinion about it. And stop listening to negative opinions, these guys are just jealous 😂 Keep it up, great author. all love for you🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Evaluation: Above Average (Could've been a Gem). WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on (Usages of pronounce & adjectives) which author is slowly improving on. A well thought and structured storyline. 4/5 SD: It's disappointing as the development is moving on a snail pace rythm and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow plot which is lackluster (author-san decided to do a step-by-step development of both MC & story) which is a bit boring as it seems like the same HP story with a different MC selfinsert-OC, there's only a few changes. 3/5 CD: The MC (SI-OC/Reincarnator) was superbly made with a mysterious lineage (Beastly power, enhanced physical & magical attribute) and a highly intelligent and mature individual & MC persona is commendable (Chaotic-neutral/gray). The downside is the very snail pace development of MC & story itself. 4/5 US: Expect that the update isn't that timely as it used to be as author-san needs to focus on other things such as his Patreon which I am not against with but the quality isn't up to standard anymore. 3/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided to re-do your HPVerse via a different MC which has different background and powers. Other branches of magic wasn't utilized such as Rituals, elementals, etc. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD