Reviews of Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

I liked it, so I'll give it five stars. I liked the powers of the MC, and even though the story is a little slow (I've seen slower stories) I like how you're trying to develop the characters and the background of the world.

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Aside from the writing and consistency of updates, everything else is dumpsterfire. Don't waste your time, 300+ chapters might be a lot, but the story development and MC is insufferable.

The story had a great potential(atleast top ten) with no system and extra perks but i dropped it after reading 80 chapters. Writing quality: Decent MC: Not likable.Narcissist. it likes he is jealous of Harry and always judges other characters and world building negatively(most of the time). Story progression : Even for a "slice of life" story it is very slow and boring. Dialogues: Too cringe.

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I have only read 10 chapters so my score is more lenient then usual. Writing: It is readable but you can tell he used MTL and admits it, so some spelling and grammar mistakes are present but not too much. Stability; I just gave it a 5... i dont know if its stable or not. Story; The author has made the urban fantasy novel/movies of harry potter into a High fantasy novel. The mc is able to do things he shouldn't be able to do even in a urban fantasy standard. (creating magic without blowing up things or dying, being good at everything etc.) But the ideas the mc has and the pacing outside of his learning is good and i dont know how it wil develop so i gave it a 4. Character: I would give it a 1 if i had read more then what i did and if nothing changed. So far the mc has no personality to speak of. Hes very bland as a person and i can hardly feel any connection to the mc. (I dont feel like the characters are alive) Also the mc should be named Gary and not Ethan... even for a fanfiction there should be a limit to how godly a mc should be. Background: While the world around the mc is not very much described (i stil dont know the lay-out of his house, yard or anything) It stil is a harry potter world. So in conclusion, some wil love the OP mc and the story and others wil hate it. As for me? I could not get into the story. The story is too high fantasy in an urban fantasy setting for me. (MC being able to create spells and fight trained teens or maybe beat adults etc,.. but mostly creating spells. Luna her mother died because of it and she was a genius at it but the mc here? his half baked fanfic and canon knowledge lets him create spells without truly understanding magic? And not mention of any accident happening during his testing? It is too much even for a fanfic in my opinion... yours might be different)

Handsome, millionaire, special power, ultimate bloodline, godlike 10 year old boy. Why do people read this? Why do people write this? It is impossible to create a plot when your main character has no flaws, is the strongest and is loved by everyone.. smh

One of the best fanfics I've read. If you can bear with the grammar in the beginning (which is honestly still amazing considering the author was translating to English with google translate since he didn't speak the language), the grammar progressively gets better as the fic progresses. The story quality does too, but even from the start the story is already pretty decent. Though it becomes better and better, to the point where the story is now absolutely fantastic, and as I've said already, one of the best fanfics I've read. Great work author-san, and I hope that you have an absolutely wonderful week ahead! :)

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The title and description along with the OC and how he handles and deals with the wizarding world while also being able to understand animals via Beast Talk as well him training his body as well his fighting moves/instincts while also being remarkably smart and successful not to mention how good he is in magic as well a prankster look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on

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This is an amazing story to read. I've laughed multiple times, felt sad, and generally had an emotional roller coaster while reading this. Hands down an incredible story for anyone who wants to relax.

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Loved It! It's Perfectly Balanced Fic. which is Tooo Perfect Author Seriously love it. .......................................................

great. Interesting humor fanfic

this is one of the best fanfiction I have read . Author keep up the great work . ............................................................

Just a great overall story. Btw I want Daphne to be the Love Interest. It will amazing to see a muggleborn hater falling in love with muggleborn.