Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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Great story and a must read for all HP fans. Kjdldldjødldlllddylsllylydldrruørhødødjødjfæjfdjøffjødøjdøjdøjdøgfjææjføjdøudjjdøjøjøjdødjæjfkæfdjjkfjshøhøudøysøysuppywøduøudøysoypyslyslyaltalylføys

very slow story with short chapters, but very interesting. only negative point in the story is the average beginning, but it's getting better and better

I'm quite curious about the song or the purpose of Fawke's singing or doing his song that he did on the MC twice not to mention wonder how the Flamels will reply back to him and just what will his friends discover look forward to reading more cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on

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Excelente historia. Ya quiero ver como se sigue desarrollando el personaje y que interés romántico va a tener! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

It's a really great story.. I love Ethan have a unique talent (beast talk).. I read many stories in which MC is OP (you're the same), but you're different in a few point.. like usually MC just be an observer because he/she doesn't want to change the plot or be the golden trio best friend so the plot till same.. and Ethan is friend with Weasley twins and became the new prankster (i don't see any other story with MC became a prankster with Weasley twins, I think they're the best weasley children).. And you have a few mistranslation, but it's okay.. I still knew the meaning and can understand it.. 😁👍 Can't wait to see the new chapter 😍😍

The best Harry potter fanfic in my opinion The story is great not like other Harry potter fanfic the personal of the mc is very good not just helping Harry everywhere The conversation between the characters is wonderful In the end all this fanfic is great keep up

I've been reading this novel for while and I don't remember many grammar errors, so be aware that of they were of any issue in the first chapters they aren't now. Even then I'm a picky person about writing, so although the may have been some minor mistakes the sentences were always easily understandable and the writing style, although simple, always fluid to read. What I think is the biggest downside to this story is instead the amount of worldbuilding and character development: although they are welcomed they slow down the narrative considerably, especially since some of the information shared is for for sale of building the stage of the story than the story itself. Still pure infodumps are rare and you may as well count this style as the charm of this story, more similar to being a diary of someone living is life than an adventure. Finally I think the characters are depicted really well and don't seem caricatures of themself and even the protagonist is allowed to be a person in this story, instead of an embodiment of some value or quality (having to be perfect, ruthless or such). Thanks for writing and I'm looking forward to your next chapter

great effort from a new writer hope he doesn't get discouraged by the haters and continues to improve.....................................................

I'm enjoying the novel. Mc is OP but only when compared to other students and not adults. I also appreciate the fact that the MC is not a part or trying to be a part of the gold triobos far. But if I have to dislike something it's all the ------------- underscores you put in. I enjoy listening to novels while working and when you put all these ------------ underscores after every couple of paragraphs it destroys the flow of the audio while listening to it.

Pogest hp story I've read ................................now this just gonna be random words. The other thing is that you don't have to be a good person to be a good person and have a good person and you are not going to be a good person and not 3

After catching up with the chapters, I canmot wait for more updates as this story got me hooked up. The abilities that he have is very unique as I do not se many Harry Potter fanfic with the ability to communicate with magical creatures. I look forward to the future of this story.

Come on, this is going to be my first really thorough review, I've currently read up to chapter 113. I'll start with what I consider to be a mistake, the mc at 7 to 11 years old, trains magic alone that he remembers from the movies and books, and even starts developing his own spells, which in the HP magic community would be a high risk job and only people with high magical proficiency. from 7 to 11 years old, instead of going to the leaky cauldron and waiting for someone to open the passage to the diagonal alley, to buy books on magic, the mc who says he is so smart prefers to wait for a visit from a Hogwarts professor to take him with 11 years old. Already studying at Hogwarts, even though he agrees that he has to have a balance between his social life within the school and his training, sometimes it seems more that he is more concerned with playing pranks with the twins and their friends than actually improving and enjoying it. the time you have before the war. For a person who is said to care so much about his family, he shows no interest in changing the magical community's view of muggles, even though his sister is a witch so she'll end up having to deal with that sort of thing. Although I like a world well explored and enjoyed, 130 chapters for just the first year of school, and the author explored more the mc's relationship with secondary characters, which honestly are only important during his 7 years at Hogwarts and that being nice Would you rather explore the origins of magic, the lost history of the magical community, create magical artifacts, or just create a magical company that uses Muggle knowledge to begin changing how the magical community views Muggles. Despite all this, I believe that it is a ff with a lot of potential if it is well directed and that it is worth giving it a chance. Translated on google

As there seems to be a Romance tag, who is the love interest? ...........just filling the required characters...............................

Interesante la historia, aunque a veces lo veo como MC roto Op, etc, pero bueno. Recién estoy en el capítulo 20, veamos como se desarrolla a futuro.

good. 5 star

Ok I like the story it's an interesting take on your typical HP Isekai story without the instant Op stuff or the system. Also that the MC isn't part of the Trio is a big plus. Quality, Characters, background is all pretty solid for a fanfic. The big negative point is that after the first 20ch. or so the flow of the story dropped brutality in speed. The story needed over 100chapters to shortly before Christmas 1Year. While I'm all for a story that is not rushed and takes it's time, it doesn't move forward it crawls . At this speed we need about 1000chapters to finish the story if the Author has enough perseverance to do it. The other point that I'm a bit sad about is that since the plot got more wide some characters just Vanished. Nyx for example was set up to be a companion but had no presence what so ever. Same with the Diary, I'm not missing because it just wasted a few chapters and was pretty anoying but it was set up and than vanished into nothingness. Since the Dialogue can span a bunch of chapters the actual things the MC does are very limited, the most exciting thing he did was create the Map and maybe Killing the Troll. like I said I like the story but I really want to be done with 1year already and see the MC Actually doing more interesting stuff, like building things, using the dammed Vanishing Cabinet for example or make more progress into changing the world, anything really that is not canon or 95% dialogue.

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