yohananmikhael
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lets start not from 1 st position but from last world background- interesting idea, putting a mage in cultivation world and lets see how he will live and possibly thrive, 5 stars just for that update stability- new reader here, i think its stable so 5 character design, thats the point when the story starting to go downhill, like many novels here character is like from wood, with some epiaodes of emotions, that are explained in brutally blunt way. But i think you.can get used to this. story development- sometimes generic sometimes not, average writing quality- for me the worst art of book, I can see potential in this story, but it just geta worse with all this explaining obvious thinks. Second, you can find many repeadly used words sometimes every 2 sentences you can see repeditions of previous sentence, for me its absolute no no for people who dont expect good quality and logic in story, interesting idea for a book is just not enought for me.
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i can see that the author made made efforts on editing the first chapters. this author also made the story slow progressed, which i didnt like. but i got usdd to it as i read. he was nerfed, i hate it but it was explined why he chosed to be nerfed. tuere were plenty of weird and uncommon development thay thought as a plothole, but after few reading, i realized there was a reason. the story is still ongoing so these so called plothole isnt final. so far i like it.
I find this novel very entertaining and the Mc Character is very likeable in my opinion. The romance is kinda meh since it isnโt really fleshed out yet and it may be bit cringy at times but the story is still great and with much more world building potential the story will be much more fleshed out I hope [img=recommend]
Literalmente, mi รบnico problema con esta novela es lo horrible que es la gramรกtica. Y con eso quiero decir que a veces puedes leer dos o tres pรกrrafos sin ver nada malo, pero otras veces puedes leer un pรกrrafo completo y tienes que reestructurarlo por completo para que tenga sentido. Si quisieras a esas personas a las que les gusta leer en piloto automรกtico y realmente no les importa lo que lees y solo quieres algo para leer, dirรญa que la gramรกtica es perfecta ahora, pero si no, entonces yo
Bem fiquei bem decepcionado com o cap 179 ao 181, o lucas que era o 'fodao' morreu tao simples assim bem vou esperar juntar uns caps para ver se ele ressusita.... Em resumo o deus da magia... 'matou/apagou' a 'consciencia/personalidade' de Lucas bem vou esperar que o lucas volte afinal se ele nao voltar meio que acabou a historia nhem pq o mc morreu nรฉ, pq seria a historia do deus da magia em vez do Lucas.... bem estou decepcionado com este tema proposto