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RWBY SI: The Krogan that Jacked Jaune's Life

A rewrite of my original RWBY: Jaune Arc SI with the lead man of my Ultimate Krogan story in the driver seat. I will be taking more creative freedom with the plot, as I will be removing the Relics from the story entirely. I simply am not a fan of McGuffin based plots, and the nature of the Vaults means that if Cinder fails, Salem's plans are back at the drawing board. You can expect a fair bit of dark action coming from an unflinching and unrepentant male lead with the charisma pull off the over the top shenanigans he gets up to. And by charisma I mean demonstrable social skills, not I am the author so everyone is all googly eyed over the protagonist. Anyway. I'll be working on this one night a week while I finish up Ultimate Krogan and work on whatever comes next as my new flagship once that beast of a story is finally finished. This rewrite goes out to Kai Uzumaki for being such a vocal supporter of my work. Here's to you, homie. Slow updates as I focus more on my new stories over rewrites. You can support me and my family at ko - fi . com / jmanm

JManM · Anime & Comics
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11 Chs

Bluffing

"Oh hey, it's Strawberry Sunrise girl." I grinned as Yang came over when Ruby refused to take the 'spot' her older sister had saved for her in the crowded auditorium.

"I don't know what you're talking about." The busty blonde denied flatly.

"You remember, the S & M, the call me sir." I smirked, "I remember."

Before Yang could refute, her sister beat her to the punch, "What's S & M?"

"You'll know when you get older!" the older sister answered automatically.

"Is S & M sex?" Ruby asked then covered her mouth, "You had sex with Jaune! What kind of 4D chess games are you playing with our lives? I didn't even know him before today and you have already taken him away with your whiles! And he has a cool girlfriend. Do you enjoy wrecking homes, Yang?"

Ruby ended up dragging her older sister down to her level and screaming the last part in her face. Fortunately the other teenagers nearby were all to busy being wrapped up in their own lives to care about the grade A drama going down over here.

"Jaune, you had sex with Yang and didn't invite me?" Blake shouted in fake outrage, "How could you?"

"What can I say?" I chuckled, "My game is so strong I even scare myself."

"We didn't have sex!" Yang erupted.

"But what about the S & M and the call me sir?" Ruby demanded.

"That was someone else!" Yang corrected her sister who gasped.

"So you are just giving it up to strangers?" Ruby accused, "At least Jaune is cool."

"I didn't have sex with him either." Yang snarled.

"Likely story." Ruby gave the older girl the could shoulder.

"I AM A VIRGIN!" Yang shouted, finally getting the attention of those around us.

Surprisingly, Ruby just giggled, "Really? But you are so old."

I thanked God that we are in an anime adjacent medium, because watching Yang's ghost leave her body after that social deathblow was something special.

"Brutal." I whispered.

"Fuck yeah." Blake responded.

"It's not like you have any experience with boys." Yang shot blindly back at her sister.

"Yeah, but at least I have a plan for losing my virginity." Ruby threw more shade at Yang.

"What?!" the blonde shrieked.

"The Rose Special." Ruby grinned, "Blake and Jaune are going to break up and I am going to swoop in like a bird of prey. 'What's up, sad worm? Guess who I am. The early bird!'"

"But that totally hinges on Blake and Jaune breaking up." Yang shot us the side eye, "And they… um… look super strong as a couple."

"Please." Ruby scoffed, "They're teens. Something stupid will happen and then this early bird is going to get some dick."

A pair of clapping hands sounded out, and I realized it was me. And Blake was looking pissed.

"I just like it when a woman knows what she wants." I defended myself.

Fortunately DJ Bodysnatcher saved me from further scrutiny by taking up the mic and laying down his sweet backhanded vague smackdown of the Beacon hopefuls. I barely paid attention cause I got a pissed kitty clinging to my arm and I don't give a fuck about Ozpin. A potent combo for ignoring initiation speeches.

Fortunately, everything in Beacon is CO-ED, including the locker rooms, so I got to recalibrate our relationship in the showers. A wise man once said something along the lines of fuck your way through all your marital problems. The premise being, keep your significant other so well fucked that she doesn't have the capacity to feel anything but the after shocks of your cock, and you can save yourself a whole lot of trouble.

I subscribe to that school wholeheartedly, and any Ruby induced angst was forgotten in the aftermath of me trying to push Blake's cervix into her lungs.

At least until we left the shower and the girl was sitting on a nearby bench.

"Mmmmhhmmmm." Ruby sounded and nodded her head at us.

"Does your sister know you are here right now?" I asked the girl as I opened a nearby locker and took out a fresh set of clothes, dropping my towel and giving her the full show.

"She is too busy running damage control." she smirked, "She hoped that coming to Beacon would give her the chance to be the sexy fun girl, rather than the girl who's scary dad teaches combat class. You should towel off a bit more. Don't want your undies getting wet. Need some help with that?"

"Damn, I really do." I chuckled, "But I don't think Blake is about that just yet."

"I thought I was picking up some major bi vibes, but she definitely seems to have the tall stacked blonde type both ways." Ruby commented with her eyes glued to my cock as I toweled it off.

"You always this forward?" I asked as I finally pulled on my briefs eliciting a deep sigh from my audience.

"That same scary dad that ran guys off of Yang applied to me too. Plus Yang has this weird thing about keeping me… innocent… like a little kid." Ruby answered, "I honestly had dirtier friends than she did growing up, but I always had to tiptoe around those kinds of topics around her and Dad. You and Blake were pretty open about it, so I thought, hey might as well come out of my shell too. Dad's far away, Yang is busy running her own PR. Time to just be Ruby instead of Rubaby."

"Damn." I stated as I finished dressing, "Well I for one like you a lot and not just because I am planning some hot threeways once I finish stretching out Blake's comfort zone."

"Nice." Ruby smirked.

"I heard all of that." Blake called from over where she had found a locker earlier.

"If you didn't want the sharks circling then you shouldn't have put blood in the water." Ruby called to her.

"What?" Blake yelled back.

"That whole, 'I don't know why I sleep with you' line." Ruby explained, "It was cute, and sassy, but also a giant red 'big dick over here' flag. You might as well have just shouted that your boyfriend is a dynamo in the bedroom. People might have thought you were joking, but I would have figured it out. Jaune sends out major big dick vibes."

"Goddamnit." Blake growled and appeared in our part of the locker room, "And I am not bi."

"I'll believe that a little more when you can look at my sister without checking out her tits."

Blake sucked her teeth as she swallowed down whatever lame retort she worked out too slowly.

"Fine." Blake looked at the younger girl out of the side of her eye, "You want to be a big girl. You want to fuck my man. Pull your clothes off Jaune."

"Holy shit." I gasped, "Is this really happening?"

"Yeah." Blake nodded.

"Hold on!" Ruby stood up and held her hands out, "I may talk a good game, but this is too much. I'm not ready!"

"What's wrong?" Blake looked down on her reeling opponent, "You were talking all that good shit a minute ago, but now that the dick is up on the table you chicken out."

"Are you really trying to taunt me into fucking your boyfriend?" Ruby stammered, "That's some next level stuff that I didn't think you were capable of. I tip my hat to you ma'am."

Ruby finished that statement by zipping off in a streak of falling rose petals.

"Pussy." Blake grinned at her victory over the younger girl.

"Damn." I gasped, "That was awesome."

"I know." Blake cocked her head back a bit and grinned.

"What would you have done if she called your bluff?" I asked as we left the locker room.

"Who said I was bluffing?"

As you may be able to tell, this story is hitting similar beats to the original but at a far more sedate pace, including Ruby being more 'mature' than her show portrayal.

To be honest, the characters in RWBY are quite desexualized despite dating and romance being prevelent in a few subplots. I am fine with that in a show, but not in anything I would write. Ruby is fifteen and by that age I didn't have an innocent bone in my body.

Of course I was a guy growing up in a city and she is a small town girl and those are usually one of two things, some cloistered fool or someone who has been passed around so much it is no longer losing your girlfriend as much as losing your turn.

So I struck a happy in between I think in this chapter. Ruby was armed to duke it out with the sexual themes of my writing, but not a wanton whore. Same with Yang, but to a lesser extent because I think it is funnier this way.

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