Reviews of Ruthless Business man
Ruthless Business man
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Opal_professorLv1Opal_professor
bland. the characters are not explained properly. everything is just surfacely touched. the chapters are way too short, it kills immersion. your vocabs are fine, the grammar too. research on how to write. read good books. can be improved. would be better if you did a rewrite
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