Rule Of Unity (Dropped)

Introduction - Follow the adventures of John Lennard. With his skills and wits he will overpower his opponents one at a time and submit to his Rule Of Unity. --------Information-------- Evil Mc Update Schedule - 2 Chapters/ 1 week Word Count/ !.5k - And above depends on how I'm feeling I've put a lot of thought into the novel, so far the beginning is probably my downfall, since I'm not very good at starting off novels but please give it a try and tell me what you think.