Grand_Void_Daoist
The main character is interesting to watch develop, grow, and get stronger. There are some things I didn't expect to happen in this book that happened in a good way that I didn't anticipate! Trust me when I say there is a plot twist will make you think "oh that makes sense now that I think about it". I just hope that worm boy's form gets a bit more visually appealing. (I just want him to get a neat pattern or something) Thanks for the great book author! (/^▽^)/
Overall, I do love the story. In the beginning, mc is weirdly dumb, there is a reason for this. He got better after chapter 21 or so. System gave weird rewards at 1st. But after a while, I understand that this is a support system, it doesn't give any physical rewards. I think the story format can be improved, user status doesn't need to show everything everytime, I only want to read the changes.
When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying. Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km. The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.
Well, Though There are only 5 chapters for now, I can see a great potential in this book. The worm setting made me thrilled and it felt as if I myself was experiencing all those events. I have already read the other book of the author which was quite good and I think is book can also be equivalently good. Waiting for further updates.
Un mc retrasado, que ha dejado de seguir creciendo mentalmente. El tipo que lo usa como lanza es mejor mc, mas calculador y frío y sin un risa retrasada, el gusano mc no tiene casi planes a largo plazo, solo se guía por impulsos. Lo que puede ser peor que un mc retrasado sea neutral bueno o malo, es un mc retrasado pero con un sistema que debería hacerlo mas inteligente y darle mas opciones, ademas de una potencia de calcula tremenda. Un estereotipo de mc mitad rimuru y leylin de la novela de magos, por el lado de rimuru por sus risas estúpidas y casi uso nulo y investigación del sistema en profundidad y por parte de leylin por dejarle casi todo al sistema, no poder dejar cosas atrás emociones etc, aparte de la poca creatividad al uso del sistema. ===Resumen mc estupid mitad rimuru y mitad leiylin
Pleasantly surprised with this novel. This is a good "monster Isakai" type novel that can still incorporate human politics without the main character losing his identity as a monster. Great woldbulding, power scaling, fun side characters (human and monster), and a cunning protag, I'm really enjoying this novel!!!!