Good work need more chapter more chapters ,.,..,,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Dear Author are you high while writing this do you remember the pasts of heroines and MC's why is MC bowing his head and asking premission from Zi Ling's Master or some old woman and this Zi Ling she didn't oppose to the idea of getting together with with some sects young master. MC still keeps begging like simp dog why bother since she does not place importance on their past reletionship and values him. If not for MC she would be dead like how ungrateful you need to be
how are people giving this a 5-star the grammar is so awful anyone who speaks English (primary language or not) can easily write better grammar than this author
Plot is excellent, story starts with Feng Yun the MC with no cultivation on the clan, but still train his butt off every years, somehow he obatin a inheritance from the Evil clan that dual cultivates, on merging with the inheritance that he got, he was able to cultivate normally like others and also by dual cultivating with the females he likes or love whatever, and so he journey starts from there on.
keep up the great work author. do try grammarly to help you edit your work so the English is smoother. besides that, hope to see an increase in releases if possible. Thank you for your work!
Standard xinxia model would be the right classification for this story, you can change the mc's name, the cheating inheritance he will gain, name of clans, sects and schools, sometimes cultivation system and skills, however the essence is the same , battle power that surpasses levels, solid foundation that increases skill power, compression to understand everything fast, slow cultivation... It's nice to have a base, but simply crtl+c crtl+v is boring. However if you like this model, it's a story for you, the bonus is the +18 which doesn't have in the most famous ones.
Worth taking the time to read .๐. Worth taking the time to read .๐. Worth taking the time to read .๐. Worth taking the time to read .๐. Worth taking the time to read .๐.
Its a good story and very good to chill with, if u want something to chill after doing a serious reading session I would highly recommend this.
Nice novel love it thank you author
Love it even though writing quality got a bit of problem but I still can understand what the author means it is ok if u think it is really bad then try (Journey To Become A True God) now that is bad english
I had a good time with this one. Recommended. The only complaint I have is grammar. There are a lot of mistakes that need serious editing.
A very good story and a good character development and details but the down point is the continued grammar mistakes ......apart from that its a good story to read.......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
There is nothing to be said all is best....๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
good novel would recommend . [img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice, One of best R-18 novel i have read this far. Mc a ruthless and calm mind, mature, and loving person. MC is fast cultivating, MC is not killing machine, who fight and killing every chapter. Lot of women with different types of personality. Older women love interest
I like the story's overall feel, at least so far i have its only issue stems from the slightly flawed English that will be seen throughout thee story but other than that, its great.
Nice story. The plot is interesting.........................................................................................................
This is a mediocre Cultivation novel that focused on SMUT. There is no actual romance development but the characters are not that bad though. This story is definitely not for the non-Harem fans. I enjoyed a lot because I am a Harem fan. Sex scenes are really great and story are not that light either so this is a good novel for me. Especially MC is alpha and took the girls with his own way.
Its a wish-fullfilment story, so donยดt expect a masterpeace, but its overall enjoyable. The grammar is fine in my eyes, i atleast understand the meaning behind the sentences. Iยดll keep on reading.
I'll be ompletely honest here. I did not read the book, but I read those tags๐ฅฐ. I know I'm goig to love this story so might as well get my exp. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐