Egyptionbooties
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
please author dont put harem on this story,if you do put harem just dont force it on the plot because i see many fanfic that got drop becuse of that and i dont want to see this masterpice fall down to the drop zone and keep up the good work and please dont go buying milk in the store kinda move on us
You should really update more frequently,like a chapter a day or in two days .don't copy everything from other fanfic it doesn't suit you .reply to comments more often etc etc .okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok
π MC in Konoha fanfic nΒ° 999,9999,9999 . [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Bueno primero que nada soy un latino americano por lo que hablo espaΓ±ol estudie inglΓ©s y leo novelas para no oxidarme, bueno lo que voy a decir es que aparte de Shin los de mΓ‘s personajes en la historia se siente muy seco, como que solo estΓ‘n de relleno no hay una conexiΓ³n que se sienta real, considerando obviamente la personalidad original del personaje
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