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Rewrite for Spirity

In the 21st century, an event known as the Great Shift of 2030 destroyed 90% of life on earth. A new race known as the Shifters emerged. 200 years later, countless wars divided what was left of civilization into two areas: The city-states controlled by the crime fighting SPA, and the badlands controlled by lawless bandits. Axel, a powerless Shifter in 2230, has vivid dreams of future events that never seem to come true. He has dreams of Joining the SPA academy and becoming an agent, but he is unable to deal with a bully at his local school. As Axel progresses and becomes stronger he begins to wonder, if his dreams are just dreams, or are they warnings from the future of a destiny he cannot escape? “1352 times I’ve been shoved in lockers, drowned in toilets, and beaten to a pulp...And yet, everyday I come back here, patiently waiting for that day....” Axel thought “You're trash! I kick your butt every morning but you never seem to get the message! Why don't you go back to where you came from? Why don't you quit this school you powerless loser!” Pb yelled into his face “Because… I believe in my dreams.” Axel began "I'm going to beat those dreams out of you!" Pb yelled kicking him in the stomach. Axel spat out a wad of blood, and looked Pb directly in his eyes. “I’ll never stop dreaming. You can beat me up as much as you like, but as long as my heart still beats, as long as my mind still thinks, I will continue to dream! No one can come between a man and his dream! The only person who can stop a man from dreaming is that man himself!” “Tomorrow is the day all this changes! Tomorrow is the day my dreams become Reality!” This novel was originally posted on Royal Road, and now I am bringing a rewritten version here. I am the original author. This story features images and manga panels so it is a light novel manga hybrid. You can see the images by clicking the links at the end of each chapter. They are not necessary but they provide a better viewing experience. The illustrator, Mo's Instagram is below @degamishiro https://www.instagram.com/degamishiro/

Gaburieru · Fantasy
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Chapter 7: The Room of White

So the time has finally come" Said a familiar elderly voice

Axel stood up and rubbing his eyes. Everywhere he looked was white as far as the eye could see. There were white tables, white chairs, as well as the walls and floors of the room. Even the clothes he was wearing were white. The only that did not appear to be white was the huge door that he had come tumbling through earlier.

As he marveled at the weird setting he was surprised to see an old man with long white hair and a beard sitting across from him at a long table.

The old man was picking up flash cards and examining them and then placing them back down.

"Who … are you...and where am I?" Axel asked

"Well that's one way to act act after barging into someone's home!" The old man bickered.

"What?" said Axel confused.

"You boy are in my mind!" And let me tell you things were confusing enough before you showed up!" The old man yelled

"What…? I'm in your mind? What do you mean?"

The old man just continued to shuffle through the cards, lifting up each one with a look of disappointment as he placed them back down.

As Axel observed his strange behavior he realized there was nothing on the cards. The old man was picking up and examining cards that had nothing on them.

"Hey... old guy…. why are you looking at pieces of paper with nothing on them?"

"It's not about what's on them it's about what's going to be on them!" He yelled arrogantly. Picking up one paper and putting it down.

"What are you talking about?" Axel said puzzled

Letting out a sigh the old man slid a piece of paper and a pen across the table to Axel.

"Okay, now I want you to write something on that paper"

"Okay…." Axel said, giving the old man a strange look. He began to write the letters AX before he was interrupted

"You are writing your name aren't you?"

"Yeh how did you know that?"

"Write something else for me and the answer will become clear," The old man said smiling. "Write something that only you would know."

Axel reflected on the memories of the day. The dream of the square, O'Brian's appearance, his run in with Lance. There were so many things to choose from.

After reflecting on his peculiar encounters with O'Brian he began to write the quote that O'Brien had mentioned earlier.

"In this world" Axel began to write.

"Of magnificence both beauty & chaos are in the eye of the beholder" the old man said.

Axel looked at the old man finally seeing the point he was making.

"So...you can read my mind?"

The old man rubbed his forehead and sighed before correcting Axel.

"No... Unfortunately I was not blessed with that gift." He grumbled picking up another blank piece of paper.

"I was given the misfortune of being able to see the future"

Axel's jaw dropped onto the floor. He knew Shifters were capable of truly amazing things but never thought this could be a capability. Controlling time and space was a power so incredible he could barely fathom how anyone would marvel at it.

"That's awesome!" He exclaimed. You could travel back through time…... or travel to the future!"

"Like Spiderman!"(Axel)

"Like Spiderman!"(Old man)

They said in unison.

Somewhere in Axel's reaction the old man had been copying the words Axel was speaking in perfect synchronization. As amazing as this was the old man seemed to be annoyed and bothered, made apparent by the childish voice he used to imitate Axel.

"Imagine every conversation, no every event in your life" He said sighing. "Was repeated in an endless cycle. No matter how hard you tried. Everything you did, you had to do twice. And depending on how bad you wanted to understand a situation, sometimes you could do things ten thousand times before you actually did it once!

Axel leaned back in his chair feeling attacked by the old man.

"Let me tell you!" He grumbled, "This conversation has a level of dullness I can't even begin to explain to you! It's like I'm repeating myself out loud and then hearing you repeat what I've already heard you say reacting to what I am going to say which I already know!

Axle's eyes begin to spin around in circles.

"Who are you exactly?" Axel asked

The old man stopped shuffling cards and looked up at Axel. His face was tightly held together in a disgruntled expression.

He let out a sigh before addressing Axel.

"I'm just an anxious old man who's waiting to die" "But enough banter you want to awaken your powers correct?"

Axel had a look of astonishment and opened his mouth before being cut off by the old man.

" Yes yes it's amazing I know that... now let me give you all the conversation of how I know without going back and forth I really like to save myself from repeating that conversation in my head out loud."

"Instead there's a door behind us can you see it? It is the only thing in this room that is not white." "That is the door to your mind. Open that door and you will find what you are looking for inside,"

"Uhhh and Yes is the answer, it really is that simple, however in order get what you want you have to make it all the way through your door without waking yourself up. If you fail to do that you'll fail to reach the other side.

Axel slowly approached the door. It was a dark black double bolted door with two doors on each side. On the door the word "Memories" was written across the top.

He looked back at the old man apprehensive about what lore on the other side.

"Good luck!" The old man said

Axel took one final breath before opening the double doors to see what was on the other side.

He arrived in a peaceful section of a city. A few feet in front of him he could see his child self walking with his mother. The sun was setting filling the horizon with a purple glow. As they walked holding hands child Axel and his mother came to a bridge with a beautiful lake below it.

" Axel honey, how many times do I have to tell you... you can't use your powers, we have to stay here, where it's safe."

" But mommy I see those people in the SPA use their powers all the time I want to be just like them!" Axel said

" And you can be, but not now…. right now we have to be safe! Right now we have to stay hidden until we can get somewhere safe only then can you use your powers you got it?" His mother ordered

"Yes, mother" child Axel answered

" Good now be a good boy and run to the corner store, here I'll give you a few dollars to buy a few treats."

" Thanks!" Axel said gleefully running off towards the store.

"How much longer can you keep this up?" a teenager said. He had red hair and a bandana with a V on it.

  "Vincent?" Axel thought seeing a younger version of his older brother.

"Everyday you stay here it's going to become riskier" Vincent said

"I know.. But I dont want to live in the badlands with lawless bandits always coming after us" Hera explained.

"The best place to hide is here in plain sight, upper Atlantica the land of the humans."

"Id be there for you! Ill protect you until the end!" Vincent said valiantly.

"Vince, you have been so helpful all this time… The way you look over Axel he sees you as his older brother!" Hera said smiling "And even though you are not my child I still think of you the same!" She said smiling

"Heh, I dont think of you guys as family" Vince said crossing his arms.

"You guys are my family, silly" He said shaking his head

As Axel walked down to the corner store he walked under the bridge in the distance he saw a strange movement in the water. Running down the steps to the water's surface he saw in the distance a young girl flailing around in the water.

"Heellpp" She screamed.

As she stretched her arms towards Axel she was engulfed by water falling to the bottom of the river.

  Wasting no time, child Axel jumped into the water trying to save the young girl.

  "Wait a minute.." Axel said

  "Why does this seem so fimiliar? Is this a memory?"

"Also… If I remember correctly Vincent didnt teach me to swim until I was"

Glooowww!

Axels body began to overflow with power as a white light enveloped him.

"Thats right!" Axel said nodding his head.

"On this day I saved that girl!"

As child Axel sunk below the surface of the water, the water began to twist and turn. An enormous amount of pressure burst upward as a spiraling column of water spout out from the river. Water spouted out, covering the area in water as child Axel and the girl sailed across the sky.

After traveling some distance they landed on a grassy lawn near the rivers walkway. Axel leaned over the girl to check if she was ok. She was breathing but didnt seem to be cpnscious.

"What do you do again?" child Axel said shaking his head. "Is it mouth to mouth?" He lowered his head to reach the girls lips.

"Hey Whats the big idea!" The girl said punching him in the face.

"Ow… that hurt" Axel said rubbing his face.

The girl was quite strange looking. She seemed to have most of her face covered in a dark makeup that was very gothic. The water had smeeared all over her making her face hard to make out. One thing Axel could make out was the glistening gold pendant hanging from her neck. It looked very similar to his.

After taking in a breath and realizing what happened, she calmed down.

"Thanks.." She said getting up. "If you hadn't done… well whatever you did… I would have never got to finish my comic book!" She said hugging a comic that said "Wonder Woman"

"It fell into the lake and I jumped in to get it… but I cant swim…" She said rubbing her head.

"Then why did you jump in!" Axel yelled in disbelief.

"Thats none of your business!" She said crossing her arms. "You cant swim either! Why did you jump in to save me!" She said

Child Axel blushed, he wasn't ready to answer that question.

"Because I want to be a superhero! Just like Spiderman!" He said proudly.

"Why you want to become a superhero?"

   "Because I have power… and If I don't use that power people will suffer just like you did!"

"What you have powers? What are you talking about?"

"Im a Shifter! I saved you with my water powers!"

As he spoke the words the girls eyes popped open wider than ever.

"Your a… SH-"

"SHIFTER!!! it's a Shifter! Theres shifter shifter is here! get him out of here! Within moments Axel was picked up and grabbed by humans and was being dragged off the bridge.

In the next second he heard a loud crash and was free from his captors grasp.

"BIG BRO!!! Axel shouted as Vincent picked him up running out of the city.

"Axel!" His mother cried following close behind.

"Times up Hera" Vincent said "We go to the badlands Now!"

 ""How much time do we have?" Vincent asked Axels mother. They were sitting together in a one room hut hiding.

"It's nighttime now… but as soon as the morning comes he'll find us…. And after that…. There's no telling what."

Knock knock knock!

  The room filled with silence as someone approached the front door.

  Vincent looked through the peephole to see who it was.

  "SHIT!" He yelled "The New Human Alliance is here!"

  "Hera! Take Axel and leave through the back door! I'll hold them off!" He yelled scrambling to his feet.

  "We can't…" She sighed as she peered through the windows finding the other half of the home surrounded by SPA agents.

  Before they had time to react the both doors were kicked down with an old man smoking a pipe walking through one side and a blond haired human on the other.

"I finally found you" A blond haired man said slowly approaching Axel's mother.

  "Come with me now, and I can make this all go away."

  "She won't be going anywhere with you!" The man with the pipe said standing between him and Axel's mother.

"What the hell are you doing!" The blond haired human barked.

  "We're escorting the criminal to a secure location where she can answer for her crimes." The old man in an SPA jacket said.

  "What crimes has she committed? Grant! What the hell do you think your-" Vincent began

  "Can it kid!" A blond female agent said apprehending Vincent. "Don't you understand he's saving your ass right now!"

"What the hell gives you the right to do that!" The blond man yelled.

The old man said nothing simply looking on as his agents escorted the woman.

"I know all about you Commandant", The old man said eyeing him down. "Were going to make sure she has her due process, I've got no intention of handing her over to you!"

"She made an infringement on a human city! It's not your jurisdiction!" The man said barking back.

"He… let's see you try and take her back then! Your NHA against my SPA!" the man said as his officers lined up behind him.

"You can't do this! This is treason!" The man barked

"The minute you enter the Badlands you forfeited all rights! Even The NHA Government cant defend you here! You know the rule! Right men!" The old man barked

"All lands outside of the city states Shifters hear our cry! We trade law and order for Freedom and Liberty! Live and let die!" The men sang

"WOOOOHOOOOOOOO!" They howled.

"Tskk" The blond man said as the SPA agents walked out with the apprehended woman.

"MOOOOMMM!!!" "HERAAA!!" Axel and Vince yelled.

"It's ok you two," A female SPA agent said comforting them. "Well make sure your mother is safe! You can trust us the protectors of all shifters, we are SPA!"

"I tried to give you the easy way" The blond man said, raising his arm. "I guess we'll have to do it the hard way!"

"Dark vitriol!" A voice screamed in the darkness.

A huge updraft of gas blasted dozens of SPA agents into the air.

" Fist of the desert!" another voice said.

Another dozen of agents were smashed by a horde of wild scarabs that had fashioned themselves into a giant fist smashing them.

"What's going on out there?" The old man barked.

"It's Darius's crew! There here!" One of his agents responded through his holographic tablet.

"What in the hell is Darius doing…" Grant began

He looked at the blond haired human realizing what happened.

"You piece of-"

"Hahahah!" The blond haired man said picking up Axel "You don't want to speak that way in front of a child now do we?"

"Let him go!" Vincent said yelling at the blond haired man

"You son of a bitch! Let him go he's just a child." Grant said

"For now… but he could become the child that ended up dead in a misfire between the SPA and Darius's fight!" The blond haired man laughed

"Mommmy!!!!" Axel wailed squirming around in the blond haired man hands.

In no time at all Darius's henchmen had apprehended Axel's mother. With Axel as the blond haired man's hostage he had completely subdued the SPA .

"Now… it's time to put an end to this game of cat and mouse!" The blond haired man said drawing a gun to his side.

"I don't understand you told me you wanted the woman alive?" A man in a cowboy hat said handing over Axels mother.

"I don't need her alive! I only need her cells!" the man said pointing the gun.

"Mooom!!" Axel cried

"Ughhh get away you worthless brat! The blond man said, throwing him to the cowboy.

"Please Baron… I beg of you… Just leave my children alone!" Axel's mother cried

"I tried to reason with you! I did but you kept resisting !" Baron pointed the gun at Axels mother.

"Waittt! Please… not in front of the baby the baby!" She cried.

"BAronnn! YOU Bastard!!!!" A coloumn of red flames exploded into the air as Vincent screamed at the blond man.

  "IF YOU DARE LAY ONE FINGER ON-" Vincet was incapacated by a blow from old man with a pipe.

  "Im sorry Vince…" the old .a. Said

"I'm afraid we're all out of time," Baron said, aiming the pistol. "With the SPA involved now, this will get tied up into a bunch of litigation, I'll never get my hands on you now… Alive that is!"

"Axel… Vincent…" His mother said sobbing… "Im sorry"

"What were you saying earlier again?" Baron said raising the pistol "Oh yeah! Live! and let die!"

Booom!

"Axel…." His mother muttered as the light from her eyes slowly started to fade.

"HERRRAA!!!!!!!!" Vincent yelled.

  Axel's mother fell to the ground, as the last of her life faded away into a pool of blood.

Axel's face flooded with tears. He finally understood what he had blocked out from his past so long ago. He ran out to his mother embracing her as she fell to the ground only to find his hands penetrate straight through her like he was a ghost!

  "Mother!" he cried as the child version of him helplessly squirmed in the Gilles arms.

  As he cried his mother looked up towards him directly into his eyes.

  "Do not cry my child, I'm leaving you but… you are never alone the light of the father shines brightly within you…. It will guide you to where you truly belong."

  And just like that she was gone. The light faded from her eyes and she became limp. Without moving a muscle he heard faint voices in the background as he stood by his mother's side.

  "Move the body out of my sights" The blond man ordered dropping.

  "We have no further business here," Darius's men said, getting into their hovercycle.

  "Gille?" Colonel grant said, confused as cowboy let Axel go.

  "Our work here is done" Gille said, spitting on the ground. "I dont like humans any more than you do, but orders are orders."

  Finally a pair of gold doors appeared behind Axel leading to the outside world.

  As they moved his mother's corpse into a vehicle he followed them into it never taking his eyes of her.

    "I KNOW!" Axel screamed at the old man "I know…" "I just… want to say goodbye… that's all." He said touching his mother's face with his holographic hands.

  "Mom…. I… still miss you…. To think this is how I lost you…. It was all my fault… I didn't listen… I'm sorry mom I really am!"

  As Axel sobbed over her, his mother's corpse began to resonate in white light. As he cried he felt a hand reach out and touch him.

  "It was my fault…" She said. "We should have never trusted the humans… we should have never came to this place…"

  "But mother…."  

  "Axel, I don't have much time, you will listen to your mother now, yeh? You are old enough to do that yeh?"

  "Yes mother…." He said drying his eyes. "What is it?"

  "I'm proud of who you have become, you've had a very hard life but now it's time for you to awaken your light."

  "Mom…"

  "Go now into that light, your friend is waiting for you yeh?" She said.

  "Mom….. I don't want to leave."

  His mother's light slowly began to fade

  "Silly boy I'm always with you even now…Now become the Super hero you always wanted to be" She said as the light went back into Axel's pendant.

Closing his eyes Axel said his final goodbyes and made it back outside to the last set of doors.

"What about the children?" The humans said to the Baron.

"He… hell if I care, leave them… IF they become a problem we know who to call." He said taking his exit.

"That man!" Axel said gripping his fist.

"he's the one who killed my mother! Him and those men that worked for Darius!!" Axel said defiantly.

As Axel came through the doors he landed back at the table with the old man.

  "So… now you know the truth" The old man said.

"   I knew all along I just wanted to forget, I've been depressed for so long and now I know why."

  "So what now?"

"Now I save that kid! Nothing changes, I'm going to find this Darius guy, defeat him and make him tell me where that man is!"

  "And what will you do when you find out? Are you going to walk the path of revenge?"

  "I…. I don't know…. But one things for sure, I'm going to find that man and make him answer for the crime of killing my mother!"

  Axel looked around and found, that the doors that were previously getting their energy from the light had now created a network of energy between themselves. Blue light bounced around from one to the next creating a cycle of endless blue pathways.

"Does this mean I won't have any more dreams, does this mean that all the confusion is over? He asked.

"No, quite the contrary, it means that you will be able to see things you couldn't previously, you will understand things you couldn't previously understand, and you'll be able to foresee things that you never could before."

"But enough of that your friend needs you!" The old man said.

  "  "Thanks for everything I'm sure we'll see each other again." Axel said warmly.

  "Oh yeah...I was wondering," Axel said. "why did you come to help me all this way?"

  "I was led here by the same light your mother was." The old man said. "When I had lost all hope… I followed that light here. I was just doing my best to pay you back" The old man said gracefully bowing.

  "But…. I don't even know you… I haven't done anything for you!" Axel exclaimed.

  "Not yet…" The old man said standing back up "But in time, that will change, as will you.I only hope when that time comes you'll be smiling as are now!"

  "Hehe Of course! You're welcome in my mind anytime old man! Just who are you anyway! Do you have a name?"

  "My name is Matteo" The old man smiled "Matteo the Magistar"

  "Matteo Huh?" Axel said scratching his chin. "Thanks for everything Matteo."

And without another word Axel burst through the last door back into the outside world