First... I'M SORRY MY BELOVED READERS WHO READ THE NOVEL ALREADY... I deleted Chapter of two kids. reason- after thinking more I reshaped the ending a bit. Therefore, these two won't be a part in the ending as I planned at the beginning. I'm sure you'll love the new ending more. this isn't my second review, cuz I deleted the first one to replace it by this. I'm re editing the story but I promise I won't make any major changes anymore but, just fix the issues I made as a naive writer when I started the story. The future chapters will be better as I have faithful team backing me up, reading the story before publishing and giving me feedbacks about mistakes escape my sight like repetitions. I specially thank these 'Revenge Officials'(As I name them) for their dedication to give the best story to you guys. I hope you all enjoy reading the story as much as I enjoy writing it. P.S: After editing I'll put a note as re-edited in authors notes so you can separate them. Check my profile and join my server. Join the party! Happy cultivation !
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know the author for a while and with the author creativity iam sure she will make this great story novel into masterpiecel furthermore this novel already have a good start [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story has potential. I can already see that a lot of fun stuff will happen and things to look forward to. Can't wait for xie to get his revenge ^ ^
That's a new type of novel, atleast for me. it has the spices of classic novels of revenge with a new ingredient of half-demon breed. I got a lot to say but it will spoil things. So, in short, read this novel and you will love it if you are a fantasy man.
The story is very interesting! The beginning gets you hooked with all the action going on and all of the details in the writing set up a good world setting! Overall not a bad read : )
Great novel, can't wait till the ending. You have a great writing style, very nice and interesting. Hope you update soon, I finally finished this masterpeice.
I just started reading this book, so I can't tell about the whole but whatever I read is really good and amazing šš. The plots are good and it's really interesting and intriguing. Good job Author!
Good job you sea monkee! Can't wait to see the wine addicted monkee in action again bullying everyone. Now come back to baby lizard gang server so we can continue messing with you.
I really enjoyed reading it! Maybe I will read more later. I don't read much online, but I think this one was worth my time.
I just read some first chapters so my review maybe not very accurate. Character design is the best part and world background can even better.
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Good writing quality and consistent update stability should be a must in every novel. But with this world background, it gives better color paired with unique characters and timely paced story development. Nice job.
I usually don't read cultivation stories since one needs to know a lot. But this book was quite different. The author explains the tale beautifully and explains any words new readers wouldn't know. I love how the author loves to interact with the readers. Needless to say, the story caught my attention and my sympathy. I felt drawn to the character's and their lives. The synopsis is short, sweet and to the point. Good work, Author! Wishing you the best in the times to come.
I usually don't read Eastern Fantasy because I sometimes don't understand their concepts but this was the exception. I like it! (ļ¾āć®ā)ļ¾*.ā§ The description makes me feel alive! This is what I'm talking about! You're doing great! (ā§ā½ā¦)
ML novels just aren't my cup of tea, but this here is good. I really liked the plot and the grammar doesn't have any mistakes as well. Overall, I love it! Keep writing
The concept is good and I really liked the pacing. Writing style is also good which makes the story more interesting. I will keep on reading this novel and support it
Neat plot and I like the pacing! Also, the writing style is smooth! I added this on my library and I will finish reading this novel! [img=recommend]
I love the story! I really like your writting's style, you write in a very beautiful way. Just the beginning of your novel is enough to keep me hooked. Keep up the good work!