Happy New Year 2022. Like the new cover and new story line. New possibilities. Good interesting and refreshing mate. Read this book everyday and please dont stop ok. Thats all for this review. Love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love so much.
5th review. I've read this book many times again and again. Now with Space Troopers finally. Great Book. Nice sci-fi. nice Magic. Fun-filled adventure. I have a fantastic read. Cant stop reading this book. Waiting for the space battle with magic. Way to go. Please don't stop writing
4th review. I've read this book many times again and again. Great Book. Nice sci-fi. nice Magic. Fun-filled adventure. I have a fantastic read. Cant stop reading this book. Waiting for the space battle with magic. Way to go. Please don't stop writing
3rd review. I've read this book many times again and again. Great Book. Nice sci-fi. nice Magic. Fun-filled adventure. I have a fantastic read. Cant stop reading this book. Way to go. Please don't stop writing
Hi nice new cover. Good interesting and refreshing mate. Read this book everyday and please dont stop ok. Thats all for this review. Love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love so much.
Second review. Getting much better. Good morning and great Book. Nice story and background. Five star reading. Recommended for all of you. read from morning to night. Ooosh. Keep Fighting.
Great the hair is alright now haha Hi Mate, writing another review. Good reading during my lunch hour. Thanks so much for writing and Gooday. Love you all. That's my review. Bye. Also agree something should be done to the hair.
Reviewing again. Exciting Story and very Interesting theme of magic and science. Good good good Hope its free to read, Good luck to your novel author. Bye. bye.
Hi everyboby this is a great story i follow everyday. Hmmm I riew again. very good. i get exp. haha Hi great story. Like the star wars and jedi like theme. Definitely worth reading. Please dont stop writing. Make it a trilogy or sixlogy love thanks
Its a good story. The progress of the story goes well and the world is built well. Fabulously mixing the fantasy and sci-fi. The only thing i was maybe missing was a little bit more was a bit more personality for the MC. By that I mean he can have a uniqueness about him. That also maybe just my preference
The start is super interesting. The storyline is one of a kind that will keep you begging for more. Keep going writer as we wait for more updates in our libraries.👌👌👌
The story is amazing and I can tell that this is going to be much more exciting the more I read it. the writing quality is good too with many details needed to understand the story.
It was a pretty good story overall, there were some points where I was confused and some grammar issues but overall it was good. Keep improving and writing and you'll do great.
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Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
It is a good novel. However certain flaws keep preventing this novel from achieving its true potential............1) The story is too complex. Make it more simpler. The power system is far too complex for understanding. Add a prologue or something to make it easier.2) Split personality itself is a bad omen. It would have been better if MC assimilates the knowledge of the other personality. ( or you could have an artifact where the other personality/ person resides)3)Appearance of alien and what not should not have happened so early in the novel. It is making this novel far too ardous to read. 4) Give more depth to the characters and conversations. Or else it gives a bland feel to the novel.5)A lot of events are taking place in a very short duration of time. Thus, Each events fail to get due attention from readers. It seems as if author is trying to add a lot of events( competition, travelling to another world, new characters, new species , new powers) all within few chapters.
nice story and addictive. slow build up of character though but is better than mono characters. nice change from the usual weak to strong story
I haven’t even read the novel but can you change the synopsis? It kinda spoils the novel even without even reading it. @?8(8(8(8,8,?8?8?8?8?8?
I just read to chapter 4 and decide not to continue reading it. The story is interesting mix of science and magic. I decide not to continue because it doesn't fit my taste, here is why : 1) i like the story that have a proper conversation between characters, while in my opinion this story lack conversation. 2) fyi English is not my main language so i even need to use google translate to help me understand english words that i don't know. and reading this novel is a nightmare for me, it contain so much science things that i don't know what is that and to make it worse it is in english !!! But still i give a good rating for this novel, because it is indeed interesting ! sorry for my bad english 😂
7th review. I've read this book many times again and again. Great Book. Nice sci-fi. nice Magic. Fun-filled adventure. I have a fantastic read. Cant stop reading this book. Waiting for the space battle with magic. Way to go. Please don't stop writing