CosmicPhantom
The story is a twist of unexpected turns and intriguing read a real page turner. A Interesting appeal to lifes Journey and the decisions we make have unintended consequences we live day after day. the universal law or one of the Golden rules of life “You get what you give” this may sound cliché however the story begs for truth and one’s self worth. We are but A spec on a planet of infinite universes The universe of souls leads one into a realm of endless possibilities.
Good story overall. the characters and development of story are going at a good pace and the main points of the story are clear and concise, straight to the point kind of thing but it does a good job at setting things up and giving context. Its pretty funny and has relatable esc characters. Really not bad but could could a little bit more of a description and a bit of explanation but overall it’s pretty good. Cant wait to see the rest of story as it progresses. d(-_^)