MY LORD, Is this ****? NO!!! It’s actually a good work. If you don’t like how MC ‘ntr’... which is not, cause he never fu.cked them, it’s not NTR. But, if the off chance that you don’t like the ‘ntr’ then go read the ORIGINAL.
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As long as there is no NTR (with POV this MC and not Yun Che (I don't care about him)) and more snu snu moment....... ........ ....... I'll be your eternal follower!!
Go Go NTR for YC Moth** f***** who doesn't give a **** about his wives and their safety, and always interested in unlocking new virgin Pu*****!! I seriously hate him for what he did to CYC and even though he promised he'd be there when Ice clouds Asgards would be in danger but he came only in the last moment and until before then he was enjoying his New wife's honey moon with Caiyi (Little Demon empress). For fu**'s sake don't always make your relatives and wives worry up on your ass and let them marry and enjoy having a normal life if you can't protect their asses and be together with them....I really hate the fu**ing ****ty YC who could have asked for Mu Bingyun for helping him the find out the whereabouts of Xia Qing yue and CYC after coming to God realm. But his thoughts were like CYC would be dead by now with his kid as neither him nor ******* were able to find her in that trash BPS and for XQY, he's like ******* told him that coz of her special physique the Heavens would protect and guide her so he doesn't have to give two bird fu**ing **** about her safety and only concentrating on ******* loli pu**y as if he doesn't meet her before 5 years he couldn't meet her forever..... For ****'s sake if you're going to look something please make sure other's who believe you are safe and sound throughout and hear from your wives about their problems and stuff....ZZzz
Why is that if the MC is the one who NTR others its justified...? But if another character (minor characters/villains) NTR the MC, it always make others rage quit? Well i love ur novel so keep up the good work! Well i am still not completely sure about why u chose shisui's than madara's handsome face.
Right, normally I wouldn't just slap a five star review out there without just cause, but frankly, one dude has posted dozens of one star reviews after reading one or two chapters because he likes Yun Che, and a good portion of the humor from this novel comes from Yun Che getting messed with. It's actually ridiculous, I've never seen someone so dedicated to spreading poison over one fic. I don't even understand how someone can be so dedicated to something they don't even like. Anywho, five stars, yeah. The novel is one of the better ones on the site. It's in my top 10 for original fanfiction here at any rate.
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Great Story, Keep writing! The grammar and flow of the story is greatly above average, even the pacing of the story is really good. I hope you keep at it, I look forward to hundreds of more chapters! ='P
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Has a lot of potential ...Please give the opportunity to the canon tooo.... Please fix the part how he can use jutsus.....and Please update regularly
Not bad. But the recent chapters seem kinda forced and out of character for the mc. The latest chapter kinda hit my nerve. I felt so cringe reading it. Seriously author, what happened to you? The quality of the story is decreasing by each chapter.
Wow its so fun reading review from atg lovers haha,, its worth wrinting this and rating novel,,so many retard with loving harem but dunt want the girl stealed
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Really well written but author himself could not able to understand the character of the original novel as he makes Xia Qingyue character really soft rather than cold but still looking forward to where this novel goes and which girls he included in the harem.
I understand that the purpose of a fan fiction is to show that understanding of the work and to divert it to make something new, but there, not only has the author not understood anything about the original story but in addition he does not understand anything about human nature and emotions either. No matter how high a Qi you show emotions. No woman will let a man touch her on their first meeting, let alone Xia Qingyue
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Soo... our intelegent mc that beat god on the game got a nerf? The story became nonsense with show off, pokemon catching, face slapping, and lemon. Also, the japanese name kinda weird on xianxia world.