I've finished the first Arc and feel like it's exit to leave a review. This novels awesome and I love the authors sense of humor. There are several grammatical repeating errors in the novel, but you get used to it with time and, considering English isn't the authors first language, the over all message is still conveyed 97% of the time I would say. Honestly I feel like it's good a lot of potential. Maybe if few aspects of the story and characters were more descriptive and detailed, and the author manages to enlist a good editor, this novel would be perfect. Highly recommend ppl to give this a try. Gonna go take a look at the other novels if the author before starting the second Arc
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I just started reading this book and it going good so far but I have not read into it more so am looking forward to reading more of this novel because the other reviews say it a great novel.
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It's amazing! I moved platforms for this book and I'm glad for it! I'd recommend this to people all the time, and I'm pretty sure I have before.😁
A distinctive story with appealing characters. Although I find the dungeons a confusing setting. So far, very entertaining. Takes a few well used tropes but brings a new angle to them.
Great start to the book, looking forward to reading more. The titles are quite funny particularly dumb brother one made me giggle. Worth giving it a chance
This is a good book with lots of character development keep it up I hope that the mc will become an op boi and his brother too love one ransoms reader
It really is fabulous, the characters, world building, the interactions all meld together to make a fun, laugh out loud, roll round bed in happiness story that's I would definitely recommend
Really nice story cant wait for more. The development and leveling system is fun. Small grammatical and spelling errors here and there but they dont detract from the story
The story was really great the character has developed so much however it helped out the readers to understand the thing between the characters
I really enjoy this story and it characters. I really like how the main character can change into different forms. It is so cool~! I can't wait to see where this end up going.
Oh la la!!! thank you for giving the brother someone who has lived for so long otherwise he would have been lost or manipulated easily by someone else. Haha they had the talk about the bees but looks like elfie has to teach the practical class nex ;)
I really love this story. It is well written in the sense that it progresses smoothly. The MC is a very interesting character and keeps the reader engaged and curious about what will happen next. Plus it's a bl with action. No not smut but fighting. I don't know if we'll get that later though. Hopefully😏. The only downside is the grammar. Words are often switched with the wrong one. Snore vs Snort that one occurs constantly. And was pointed out by another reader. But it's doable I can get past it, mostly.
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I absolutely loved this book . a sequel involving the city they build would be awesome to read . I've enjoyed all 5 books that you've wrote on here and can't wait for your next story .
I love this story so much and look forward to many more just like this . I was on my toes all the way to the end . it was quite a ride !!! <3
I would totally recommend people to give this a try... a lot of things bout this is good... the overall progression of the story, the Mc protectiveness of his bro , the dynamic btw the Mc n Ml... n so much more. Give it a try
how have romance (yaoi)? the protagonist is a dog how they make sex? ::///////////$/$$///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////^////////////^/^/^::::/:/;;;^:$^/$$^#^&&&&:/ :/ :( ;-; :;^:/:///
I really wanna know, what's up with this damn skull! Is it some sort of powerful magical artifact or is it meaningless to everyone except for the necromancer??? Arrg