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More? I hope update often. Its ok to involve Luci a little about the characters of original and the vampire diaries, like he introduce himself or an arc where he was in. But hope he not involve too much and a little bit deviate to original story was ok. Character of Luci was ok but I was hoping of something combine like charismatic Lucifer on tv show and op ness of Lucifer comic book version. I really hope that this fic didn't lead to only Lucifer watching what happens to the story in sideline and do nothing cause if that happen I better watch the tv show rather some recap with Lucifer point of view. Its all my suggestion and opinion. Whether take it or not its up to you but I hope you update more often.
Quite a interesting and intriguing book especially with how u made the MC Lucifer Morningstar and how he had his own city with his own people not to mention people that work for him even having a second in command and being quite well known as The Original Warlock or The Devil which coincidentally is what he actually is not to mention that whole thing with Michael is quite interesting more so how he made Klaus be quite afraid of him when he had threatened him same with Joshua Parker and nice that he adopted Kai look forward to reading more of this book truly cant wait to find out what will happen next look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Writing: 3 Updating: 1 Development: 3 Character: 3 Background: 4 (é bem ruim considerando que o efeito borboleta foi ignorado... mas eu gosto) you've improved your writing (although it's still hard to read), and the conversations and plots are very unrealistic... but better than nothing to pass the time Overhal: 2,8
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