Heaven_Sage
Hello everyone. This is Onetim3. I just want to address a few things. First, to Heaven_Sage. I am not angry that you posted my story on this website. Instead, thank you for supporting my story. It's fine to keep the story here on this platform. I assume you uploaded my story onto this website because you like this platform better? However, it would be nice to have a heads up if you (or anyone) would like to use or post my story content somewhere. I'd probably say yes, but like I said, it'd be nice to know about. A quick PM to my fanfiction page: Onetim3 Or a message to my email: one3time3@gmail.com Either one would suffice. Second, to Alfha_Robby, thank you for your kindness in taking the time to let me know that my story is being uploaded on other platforms. I greatly appreciate your initiative. And lastly, to everyone who has read, reviewed, liked, supported, and critiqued, both the good and the bad, all of it. I would like to extend my gratitude to all of you out there. I understand that the story is not the best and it has its flaws, however if you appreciated my work even just a little, then I sincerely thank you. Writing stories are never easy. Especially since this one was pretty much my first. I was still getting into the groove of things and honestly wrote it for fun. I had an idea one day and wrote it down. Then I started expanding on it as more and more ideas came to me. Before I knew it I had an outline of a story. I wrote like 9 chapters and uploaded them all in one day on a whim because I thought it was a waste to keep them to myself. I honestly didn't think that anyone would pay attention to my story. What I thought at the time was this: "Hey, if people like it then great, if not then it's fine." I don't know if I had actually ever planned to complete the story at the time, but before I knew it people started reading, reviewing, liking, and following my story. I was honestly shocked and honored. I didn't want to disappoint all those who read my story and so I did my best to complete it. Lone behold I had made it to the end and Part 1 was finished. I was able to finish because of the readers. To be honest I never planned to write a Part 2. I had planned to just end it with Part 1 and be done with writing, but the more I wrote the more readers continued to support me and so I decided that, if I had more ideas for a story I'd continue to share it all with you. So once again, thank you. Alright, that's all I had to say. Sorry for the extremely long post. Thank you everyone who still continue to support my stories! P.S. I'll give my story an average rating. It was the first story I actually dedicated myself to write and it does contain quite a bit of flaws. Are there things in hindsight that I would change? Yes. Will I ever go back and write a remastered version? Maybe one day. -Onetim3
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This book started off so well, and enjoyable. Then you decided to completely change your style. Stopped using first person, and started constantly just ignoring your MC. I personally think that was a bad decision. More then half of the last 15 chapters of the first part don't even mention the MC. This was just annoying, honestly skipped most of it. Then you just start butchering all the best characters and nerfing your MC with reckless abandon. Did you just decide you wanted to annoy us? I fail to see the reason behind this. I couldn't even finish the last few chapters. Overall you are a decent writer, and your fights were interesting. It's a shame you derailed the book like you did. I am sure plenty liked it regardless i however did not. Best wishes and good day.
Author make MC mess around in major story events but he is too cowardly to change the story so MC action becomes meainless since he'll arrive too late or fail to produce anyresult. Eg: Fighing orochimaru to help sasuke BUT after he gave the curse mark and was about to leave, so MC exposed himself for no reason. Also, Author started throwing around Xianxia logic, like MC developing breathing technique to recover chakra from enviroment (Not nature chakra), Creating his own sholin style body refininement technique, Sucking the balls of 3rd hokage since he is the supreme leader etc... I'd add more but I dont have the patient to keep reading this POS.
Seriously, it's really annoying when the author made him powerful without giving proper details on the process...like how tf did he suddenly gained the knowledge of Flying Thunder God, an S-ranked jutsu...don't tell me that he gained that while he was in Orochimaru's lab, and if it really is, then this just funny or maybe he learned that in his past life, and if that really is, then that's just dumb.
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