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Reincarnated in a pokemon game

An average boy who is obsessed with gaming dies and finds himself in a game he's played about 100 times. He sets out to become the very best and beat the game.

Spaz_Dragon · Video Games
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A little Change

A boy sits at his computer at night. His room only illuminated by the computer screen. With a controlled in hand, he is fixated on the screen. Headphones used to block out all outside interferences. His room littered with chip packets and bottles showing he was probably hear all day.

The boy had reached the finals of the regional pokemon online competitive tournament. He was facing off against the defending champion. The battle started.

The champion seemed to have a leg up on the boy as he was dominating the beginning off the battle. One by one the boy's pokemon fell but he had a plan. He was sneakily setting up with a pokemon. He then used his plus 4 special attack greninja to start sweeping. But as the boy thought he won, his greninja fell to a Blizzard from an opposing Blastoise.

"Fuck!" The boy shouted as he logged out and jumped on his bed. He then picked up his phone and checked the time.

"23:30 already! I have a match tomorrow!" He quickly fell asleep.

Next day the boy walked out of his house at around 4:30 in the morning. He was still tired as the school bus came to fetch him. He was still very tired and walked slowly to the bus.

"Come on Mack! Stop being a sloth and walk faster!!"

"Sure! Sure! Lay off will ya." Mack jogged to the bus.

Mack plays basketball for his high school and his one of the best players. But he doesn't really love playing basketball, if it was up to him all he would do is play video games. He is really good at Pokemon. He owns all the games and plays them whenever he has free time.

The game went well and they won. On the way home Mack fell asleep on the bus. He was woken up by his friend Tyler who told him this was his stop. He got off and proceeded to cross the road as out of no where a speeding sports car collided with Mack. For Mack one moment he was walking then suddenly everything went black.

He opened his eyes to a man standing infront of him. He saw the man had a white lab coat and he instantly recognized the man. He was surprised and shook as he saw Professor Sycamore, a fictional character in front of him.

"Welcome to the world of Pokémon. I am Professor Sycamore...."

Sycamore kept talking as Mack started spiraling.

"Am I dead?! Is this real! Am I actually I Pokémon! You can't be serious! This is....this is...AWESOME!!"

Mack was interrupted by Sycamore asking him.

"Well now tell me about yourself." As soon as Sycamore stopped talking options appeared before Mack. His first option was gender.

"Wait I could be a girl.....nah it will be weird since I'm actually in Pokémon."

The second option was appearance. Mack went with the lighter dark shade of skin with brown hair and Hazel eyes. After he finished he entered his name "Mack".

"Goodluck in your journey." Sycamore said as everything lit up.

Mack woke up in a bed with a Fletchling flying above him. He jumped with excitement. He looked in the mirror and saw he was the avatar he created.

"Mental." He said to himself as he changed out of the pajamas he was wearing. He dressed in a blue jacket, black pants, red cap and red sneakers. He also sported a black small bag. He walked out of his room and looked around the house.

The house was filled with an amazing aroma. He followed the smell to the kitchen.

"Mack...your finally up honey." Said a women in the kitchen.

"Hey." Mack answered not to sure who she was. She had long brown hair and she had a curvy body with caramel skin. She turned to him and smiled.

"Breakfast is ready. Hope you like eggs and bacon."

"Thanks."

"Thanks who?" She said while looking at him. Mack simply gave her a puzzled look as he visibly got annoyed.

"Thanks Venessa. Damn your manners are horrible...don't they teach you guys anything in Kanto."

"Sorry." Mack said as he giggled nervously.

The two started eating as Venessa told Mack about his mother's letters and about how his dad went missing 2 months ago. He also told him a girl next door was looking for him. Mack got up after he ate and walked towards the door as a notification popped up on upper left area of his vision area. He tapped it and it read.

'Side Quest 1:Finding Father.'

"Seems I have to find my father."

Mack then walked out and saw the beautiful town. He walked out of his yard as he heard someone.

"MACK!" He turned to see a girl in a pink shirt, with brown hair.

"Hey there." He answered as he realized it's Shauna from the Games.

"My name is Shauna. I'm Serena's friend."

"Mack." The two shook hands and started walking to Aquacorde Town.

"So Mack where you from?"

"Kanto."

"Kanto huh."

"Yea..."

"You wanna be a trainer?"

"Yea I guess. How about you?"

"I wanna become a performer. And one day I'll become the kalos Queen. The best performer in Kalos."

"That's one hell of a goal."

"Don't you have a dream?"

"Not really coz to me this is already a dream come true. Becoming a trainer....I can barley contain myself."

Shauna saw Mack staking a bit. She then realized how much excitement he was holding back. She smiled and gave him a pat on the back.

They reached Aquacorde Town and saw Serena sitting with Tierno and Trevor. The two sat beside them as Shauna introduced Mack.

"Guys this is Mack. And Mack this is Serena, Tierno and Trevor."

"Hey guys." Mack said.

"Yo." Tierno answered.

"Hello." Trevor said nervously.

"Hi." Serena said with a warm smile. The moment Serena smiled Mack was mesmerized by her beauty and he went blank.

"So guys Professor gave me us these three Pokémon so Me, Shauna and Mack can choose starter pokémon."
"Mack should choose first." Shauna said.
"Okay."

Serena released three pokemon from the pokeballs. The three were a blue frog Froakie, a yellow fox Fenneken and a green hedgehog looking pokemon Chespin. Mack saw Froakie and felt an instant connection.
"Froakie. I choose you."

I decided to rewrite the novel from scratch because after reading it myself I realized the writing was lazy and pacing was horrible. Please comment what you think of this new chapter and give me advice on what to do to improve too.

THANK YOU TO ALL THOSE WHO COMMENTED ON THE OLD CHAPTERS BECAUSE THEY SHOWED ME A LOT!!

Hope you enjoy the story. Thank you :)

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