Reviews of Reincarnated as the stepson of a mafia mob [BL]
Reincarnated as the stepson of a mafia mob [BL]
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To be honest what really caught my eye was the book cover... it's a really cute picture of V from BTS and Fyi I'm a proud Army💜👌 Well for starters the book was a bit confusing at first because I felt MC's whole get up was mostly over exaggerated a bit which later at some point reduced the overall impact he was to project....like really too much of everything is bad. I don't like when MC was being pushed around and beat up,I thought he went to the military,infact his death was a bit...staged and sorry(overrated),🙀 You were basically hinting really high standard MC but he definitely didn't make the cut(unfortunately...), overall I think the synopsis is really well written and the book has a very unique and original concept,and even despite the hics About the grammar I really enjoyed it... I'm giving you five stars because I'm totally being biased right now 😉🤫
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The story has potential in my opinion, but the protagonist seems to overpowered (He is a person, who has a very high position in the military, is a well-known artist and a highly successful game designer etc.). Furthermore the text switches between tenses, which does not work out. The idea itself and the storyline- from what I have read- are rather charming, therefore a few plus points are given.
author is a bit misogynistic, and the writing has a lot of self inserts . the mc is powerful strong but infront ml he is as meek, weak and fragile a person could get. Mc at one moment is the most hottest person alive but jokes on you he is a virgin and will only sleep with ml ever. even he is old and hot get confessed to everytime but he will be dumb to every confession on the other hand the moment he will see the playboy ml he will spread his legs . lol.I hate when the world works together to keep mc virgin for no reason and the ml is playboy for no apparent reason.it's basically saying mc is an equivalent of a women in a backward society where she can be powerful but not infront of a man . also will be forever virgin .sometime mc act smart but other time he is as dumb as someone can be . pls girls stop writing lgbtq novels if you want to bring yourself j to the story about your virginity kink.. stop writing gay guys as typical 2000s novel girls . virgin pure , if powerful not infront of ml .
