OK NO BS BUT TRUTH..THIS NOVEL IS EPIC FUN TO READ ..THIS GET 7 STARS BECAUSE IT PURE FUN FOR YOUR MIND..THIS NOVEL IS THE ONLY GOOD ADULT NOVEL IN THIS PLACE BECAUSE IT THOSE NOT TREAT THE PEOPLE THAT READ THE STORY LIKE DUMB ANIMALS..SO READ THIS NOVEL NOW AND BE HAPPY BECAUSE BELIEVE ME YOU WILL BE HAPPY WHEN YOU READ THIS GEM. THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR THIS GEM.
OK THIS NOVEL IS A 5-STAR ZEX CLUB ..READ THIS NOVEL TODAY AND ENTER THE CLUB AND GET LOST IN HOT ZEX..GOD THIS NOVEL IS YUMMY I WANT MORE EVERY DAY.
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Well, not much to say, it's a good novel with a very good pace of release, I hope it goes far.................................................
Amo sua histรณria, sua inscrita รฉ incrรญvel e espero que continue melhorando(โ โงโ โฝโ โฆโ ) A histรณria do mundo, dos personagens sรฃo incrรญveis e adoro os diรกlogos (โ โงโ โฝโ โฆโ ) continuarei acompanhando e tenho a esperanรงa de que essa histรณria nunca acabe (โ โงโ โฝโ โฆโ ) QUE ELA CONTINUE PARA SEMPRE ๐คญ๐ฅ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Only one chapter so far but i enjoyed the short read, i like how gamey the crafting system is and im looking forward to more chapters. Thanks for writing, keep up the good work!
Writing quality - very nice, there's the occasional mistake but that can be easily fixed. Story Development - I'm at atleast 100+ chapters in the book, they're still in the clearing. Character Design - again amazing each character has their own unique characteristics. Updating Stability - the Author updates everyday with the occasional bonus chapter. World Background - now this is the one I'm the most amazed at. Not only did the Author create their world amazingly, they even made their own mythology.
Great novel so far, interesting plot, dual system is unique and stable update times. Keep up the good work!
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This is my first review for any book and might be biased so bear with me writing quality:there are some mistakes but it's generally much better than most authors on webnovel story pacing:it is slow... but that's what makes all the time for those L.emons so I like it character designs:very good designs and are very easy to imagine despite my bad imagination update stability:1 chapter daily and an occasional bonus chapter as well but no amount are enough when you're enjoying a book so yeah.. world background: the thing I really like about this is how the author has connected every thing like how the seasons originated there's a whole mythology about it keep writing author all my power stones are yours but no golden tickets cause I'm poor ๐ข anyways can't wait to see where this goes (now that I think about it I've never typed this much before)
A really enjoyable book with no unnecessary drama or plot points
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I swear to god I've been thinking about a plot like this for a while thinking I'm gonna write it one day just to find this TwT anyway I'm juat gonna enjoy.
Fun Novel to read only thing I donโt like is refhial getting married again besides that itโs a fun read
no espere realmente que me gustarรก este tipo de novela pero tengo que decir que este escritor sabe muy bien como hacer las escenas de ustedes ya saben que
โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ I like the book need more chapters โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
I want more!!!
greaat read love astra the main chick she is totally a queen in her own right