Is it dropped or redone?......................................................................................................................
One of the funniest novels I've looked at in a while, and it's a pretty interesting take on a saturated genre. I love the comedy, I just like to imagine walking into this guy's house and seeing hundreds of dakimakuras lining the wall. There are some grammer mistakes, but the writing more than makes up for that
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To think that I have found a book that very underrated here.. 1.It is a nice-paced story even though the writing quality kinda not high quality. It was still enjoyable experience reading this story. 2.Almost forgot to mention that every chapter is really short, wish the Author could write more.
Could use a lil bit of work to be honest but I think it's worth a read. The plot is cool,world is good,charecters are acceptable,8/10 for me lol.
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"absentmindedly puts on and takes off ring" looks around confused. anybody else hear crying? .
This novel is awesome. No wonder millions of people were/are reading it. In other words: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
in my opinion this is a very good book and i would recommend it to anyone who likes most books like this and im definitely gonna send some gifts and i am going to tell alot of my friends about this book
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Really good concept but the writing quality just makes it not worth it. Hopefully the author will improve if they continue the story, otherwise it was very enjoyable.
The idea is pretty good, and time skips are normal and fine. However, some characters actions do not match with their role. Maybe try and link character background with their morals in you mind before using them. This would prevent such contradictions. Also, some random skips from first to third person and back, but nothing to serious. Overall a good novel. Keep up the good work author
I haven't read anything in the actual story. All I know is from the description and I must say....you had me at "FBI OPEN UP!" You deserve 5 stars across the board for that alone. Good day.
Honestly speaking, the story is very interesting with short chapters. The writing quality could be improved a lot. Example: Aliss's father / Aliss' father
First thing first, I stopped reading at chap18 so I don't know how thing go beyond that. The story is interesting, whith the charactere reincarnated as a ring and the MC get dragged left and right. While the writing isn't that bad, it's not good either but you can understand the story without issues. The world background has yet to be developped (maybe later? I stopped reading quite early) And finally, the charactere are rushed? (English is not my mother tongue so sometine, I lack vocabulary). A exemple, the MC get attached to it's first owner for no reason. Some people get introduced then leave without much impact... All in all, a good concept whitout major flaw but the minor ones get me off. If you're the type that continue don't unhook off easily at minor things, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
The writing is horrible. If this could get fixed reading it would be enjoyable. But it sucks now because of the writing quality. The story is ok and the idea Is pretty good.
The Story is very engaging. It almost feels like you become apart of it. What else should I write? I like it. And you might too. So give it a shot. You might have expected a good written Review, but...
The story line is so interesting and unexpected. I really into the story. Moreover, I hope that the new chapter will be released soon. I want to know more about the main character and what will happen to him. If you are looking for an unexpected story, this book is the best way to kill the time. 😻 thanks, author keep it going. 💯
Funniest thing I ever read. To be honest, take a read. I may not be a ffan of this game rpg elements book as it is overrated but this story is quite interesting.
I Love It. ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️