Romeru
Simply said, this is one of 3 4 books I'm willing to spend my coin (basically money) on for latter chapters. A worthwhile read and it's a pity I couldn't binge read it till the end. The background story caught my interest and the plot kept me reading. It's underrated to say the least and I believe it deserve much more attention than this.
My favourite webnovel! The story just keeps giving, and just when you think you know what’s gonna happen: PLOT TWIST! The writing quality is excellent: dialogues, decriptions etc. are so vivid, you just get completely absorbed in the story. If you like funny stories with a dark edge, then I definitely recommend you to read this!
Dramatically there sometimes when the wruter refers males as she and females as he but that is very minor. Apart from that this is amazing. when i started reading it I thought it will be like any normal Overpowered MC all cliches but this story has strong plot armour,character development and great ideas. Being a system type novel the whole concept is different. Probably comes in my top 3 of the novels I have read on this platform. I love your work man keep at it, because I know it is hard to keep an Overpowered Mc with a system as interesting as you did. Amazing I used all my power stones on you man, keep at it.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It takes a really interesting concept and manipulates it in a way that's really enjoyable to read as a reader. The MC is a bit naive, but its quite understandable given that he's 5 years old. The story melds a combination of humor, action and drama all into one plot. The characters are three-dimensional and easy to connect with as a reader, giving the book depth. My only "pet peeve" about this book is the story development. While its still good, there are a few aspects that feel just slightly rushed and not super thought-out (but that's the perfectionist in me talking). Otherwise, I would recommend that you read this. You will not be disappointed. Props to the author!
I absolutely love this story. The comedic moments made me laugh hard. The tragic moments made me ball my eyes out. It truly is a work of art. The only issue is the tendency of using the wrong gender pronouns for some characters here and there. There are a few other grammar errors too. Other than that, it is absolutely amazing.
Been reading this, at first I thought it was only going to be a normal eastern fantasy with a system, but then western elements were introduced and i liked how it subtly influences the story. And yes, characters actually acting like their age finally!! Laughed my ass off in the earlier chapters. And then we got to the end of volume 1 all i have to say is prepare yourselves for a rollercoaster of emotions. This has been one hell of a ride. Hoping for more chapters from author!
Amazing story, one that you'll quickly get addicted to and continue to read even through the night and get no sleep lol, it's a roller coaster ride of the feels that make you want to just love the MC and continue to read about him, I hope author comes back and updates book 2 for it though, gonna miss baby veil...