Hello, Author here. This is a story I started on a whim for WPC #192 and somehow won bronze. The first 20 or so chapters are just me searching for directions I should be taking this novel to. So, many ideas that pop up there don't last for long. Especially, the dual personality. However, the world I build up during these times is not random. Also, please do not expect the MC to be a genius or something, and just enjoy what he does.
I should say I stopped reading around chapter 100. The idea is really cool and I loved the first 50-60 chapters but it fell of from there. Similar to many other books with a non humanoid MC it dosent stay that way for long. He gets a human body and all of a sudden its like every other cultivation book on this app. It feels like he is limiting himself greatly because he wants to be a human and have a human body. He could "sleep" anywhere he wants for a few hundred years and have enough energy to buy whatever he wants but he wants to cultivate slowly for some reason and then is mad/upset when he isnt stronger.
Started off promising but turned into a cultivation novel after chapter 130, dropped. I dont understand why authors always go this route whenever they bave a system involve in the story. I also don’t get why MC always getting frustrated when he doesn’t have enough energy to spend when he can just sleep for a couple hundred years.
Cool story with good worldbuilding and side characters. The prevalent and major issue that ruins the book for me is the sheer stupidity of the MC, born with an IQ rivaling the rocks he resides in, he seems unable to think for himself and use his abilities and system in an efficient way. Another major problem is the inconsistency of the system's point system. The value of items and knowledge of things in the system shop fluctuates wildly to where a couple of shovels and a single coin cost as much as getting a fully functional human body. You could buy basic knowledge of every language in the multiverse, or you could get a farming toolset... Overall I believe the cool and interesting setting and universe are ruined by an incompetent lead.
I read up till chapter 89 but after the first arc which was good it just gets boring. One thing that I hate is how dumb the MC is sometimes and he is limiting himself. He says he wants to stuggle so he gets the worst talent and body but all he does is just complain how slow he cultivates and compares himself to others.
This is a good story among so many trash webnovels. While people will think in the first chapters why the MC doesn't Just sleep until he becomes OP,it will be explained later. The MC doesn't want to be OP without doing nothing. Just think about it,how boring your life would be if you were OP (Just like Saitama)? You wouldn't feel ALIVE and the MC Is Immortal,so... This is a new world with many new things to see and we know that there is a Universe and Multiverse to explore. I hope in 200-300 chapters we Will be in another Planet and It would be cool if the MC creates an army throughout the Universe with the groups of people he helped because it would be like a Family and the MC won't feel alone